Very nice poem you have constructed that perfectly describes Yazoo. The lines are awesome, well written, and they just fit Yazoo's character in the best way possible.

Good work!

O Yazoo! This quite describes him. Awesome

I haven't seen AC yet, so I don' know what kind of person Yazoo is... But this sounds good, too!!

Good ol' Yazoo. ^_^ Nice job.

yay, i'm glad i got to see this before hand haha.
i really really love how u put in there that he's a mystery even to his own siblings.
aw, you portray him perfectly too...he shows no emotion...almost as if he were just a stone statue, only meant to speak when spoken to...
this is going on my favs

How...what do you call it..poetic
I think we have a winner! Your words are chosen wisely, I like your sense of style. One word...
BRILLIANT!