I really found it sweet and i think that there should be more oof this pairing

not bad..interesting transitions...Im a little iffy with the pairing,but I do want to read more...I hope you are going to update...

Wow; you never see yaoi for Marmalade Boy! There needs to be more of it... I never thought of Michael/Kei though. It kind of surprises me now that I think about it. Is that really the end? Or is there going to be more?

Nice story!

oh my GAWD! That was amazing! I'm glad to see someone in the MB fandom has some slash sense. But it was so cute! And sweet... and prettily written, and... and... *can't even think anymore*

sleep deprevation, sorry. but it was. you think you could write a yuu/miwa though? I've been looking for one, but I can't find one!

XD TABBY XD

Aw! This demands a sequel! Anyways, this was awesome! Never seen Marmalade boy, but this relationship sounds awesome! This fic was wonderful.

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Amazing... absolutly amazing! I love it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Very interesting. I was hooked the whole way. Right guys?

Kei & Michael: *Kissing and about to move to next level.*

Ooh-kay. Anyways, I loved it and so did Kei and Michael. I bet if I check in Kei's room, there will be a notbook saying I love Michael.

Kei: *breaks from kiss* Don't even think about it

Michael: *whimpers and does puppy dog eyes at Kei*

Kei: *gives in and reclaims Michael's lips*

Michael: *kisses Kei hungrily*

Get a room!

Oh, i luved it! Update soon kay! Plz read my fics. Tanks._

Funny that I've never reviewed this one before...
First, I *adore* what you've done with Michael. It's one thing to make him bisexual, but you've gone and made him *experienced* as well (the "f*ck and run" bit made that completely clear)-it's a beautiful thing.
Also, I like the stuggle between them for control of the encounter. Michael, as the initiator and experienced one, seems the obvious choice (and he seems to win out), but I think Kei is a bit of a control-freak and that's come through beautifully.
Overall, I think this is one of your best stories ever. I'd ask for another, but this is the kind of thing you don't want to risk spoiling with duplication, huh?
Oh yeah-what happens when Miki crawls in to find her pillow or to sleep? O_o;

wow! i really loved it! i agree with jinx, u should rite a sequel! so cute!

I seem to keep coming back to this story time and time again. It's written so well and captures those heady feelings of new and unexpected romance that seem to be missing in alot of other love stories. I'm addicted! You really should write a sequel. Please!

Wai! This is soooooo adorable! I love them! I love them soooo much! *jumps up and down* They're sooooo cute! I totally see it! It makes me wanna see that episode again... but because that really doesn't happen... I'll be all upset and cry... but it SEEMED like it DID exsist. Which is a good thing, trust me. They look so cute together... wai... I hope there's more of this... I wanna read more MichaelxKei fluff! I demand it!

is THIS the end! i MUST admit, it was a lil weird AT FIRST! but, that can't be the end! nina

This story is sososo good. There needs to be more MB yaoi fics like this one.