update soon

loves loves loves update!

It's fairly interesting so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

i love it update soon

i really like your stuff..soo please update... so far it's good although voldermort leaving isn't excatly plausible but it's still good
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o! this is interesting. where'd he take them?

Once again, you've definitely got the basics down, and the characters are better than the other story I reviewed.

There isn't really much evidence that Lucius abuses his son, but you kind of gave me this idea that Draco has an underlying resentment for his father. That's not OOC at all, and even has basis in canon (CoS). If you can keep going with that, maybe Draco is unloved by his father, instead used as some kind of trophy-son, it'd work well.

I do think you need to come up with a better way for Draco to escape with his sisters, but Voldemort was decently IC here. He used Draco to rile Lucius up by implying that Luvius was weak, which seemed to work well.

I think Draco needs to be more afraid though. If you could portray him in the same vein as Sirius's brother who tried to back out of being a Death Eater, I think it would work better. He definitely showed signs of it in HPB. But Draco should be alot more scared of Voldemort than he is here, because after all, he IS only 16.

Interesting start though, looking forward to the rest!

I like it! Update soon!

This is an awesome beggining to the story - I'm hooked!

I like it. Post when you can

Interesting plot. Please update soon ^_^

wow that was an awesome first chapter and i can not wait for the next chapter!=)

o i'm intrigued please tell u have more comin soon.

this is great im lovin it more and more

wow. it turned out better than i expected. good job. its too early in the game to see if draco is in character (not that i care). please update. i really like it!