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| Remmy and Addicus 2008-05-15 ch 15, | abuseMe too. ^^ Very good story. You write every character from Inuyasha so well! |
| Deritine 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHmm.. intriguing beginning. Could do without all the back story, though. You can probably assume that someone reading an Inuyasha fanfic at the very least knows the characters, etc. We don't need paragraphs of their life story. A couple words of note at the most. I mean, I've not seen nearly all of the series and I was getting bored with it regardless. Besides that, though- good start. |
| birning ice 2008-01-07 ch 15, | abuseI love your story! I hope you write a sequoil soon. I cant wate! :) |
| Avelyn Lauren 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuseI figured that he was going to be taking a very cold bath. Inuyasha threw away his chance with her when he poisoned her accidentally at the springs. He should have thought about that. Then he made the same mistakes with Kikyou that he had made with Kagome. He's a fool that in this case didn't learn. I liked the story. I'll tlak toyou later. Arigato and ja ne! |
| Chingkai 2007-07-02 ch 15, | abuseGreat story, I absolutely loved the last paragraph...I just about died at picturing Sesshoumaru arguing with himself and being pulled by the collar. Keep it up! |
| kill-a-mockingbird 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abusehm...um...um...i dunno what to say lol :) Metalickfirecat out! |
| Teslyn 2007-05-27 ch 15, | abuse::gasp:: You left Inuyasha hanging! Anyways, lovely story. ^^; I do hope you write a sequel! |
| en route 2006-12-04 ch 15, | abusewait, that's it? we're not going to find out what happens when inuyasha finally confronts sesshoumaru and kagome? we're not going to see the hanyou turn sane again? we're not going to know how sesshoumaru and kagome's child turns out? we're not going to find out what kagome actually is now? or if she ever will see her family again? great story, but there's so many questions left unanswered. i do hope you'll write a sequel. |
| itachi 2006-10-21 ch 15, anon. | abuseOh man! I love this story!! It's so full of lemony goodness and I can't seem to get enough! I hope you write the sequel soon or I'll combust in a flurry of suspense and wanton-ness! Ja ne. |
| KawaiiBitch 2006-10-20 ch 15, | abuseWow. I really loved this story! It was really really good! Out of all of the ones that I have read (only begun and never finished because they sucked) where Sesshy and Inu switch bodies this was the ONLY one I've ever liked. That says a lot since i'm so picky! Stupid Inuyasha he's such a loser. LOL I read this story on... another website since I wanted to read the lemon and didn't know if you editted it out like in Primal (such a bad girl! *slap on the hand*). But I really liked it and look forward on your other one! |
| kagome.inuyoukai 2006-09-19 ch 15, | abusesequel please!! |
| Chaos-and-Serenity 2006-07-27 ch 15, | abuseI can't be greedy now... This story was a thrill to read and I will be awaiting a sequel if you should choose to write one. You're an excellent writer with intriguing plots, well fleshed out characters, and above all else, you do the english language justice. Thanks for writing this enthralling story. I need more good fanfiction in my life (looks warily at the toliet)... I'm definitely adding this to my favorite's list. |
| Chaos-and-Serenity 2006-07-27 ch 14, | abuseAlright, for a moment I hated you. I've been reading this story all damn day! God my life is going down the never ending toliet of fanfiction... Now that I'm done hating you, onto the praise! I was hooked from chapter one. I've finished already, but I feel greedy for reviewing at the very end so I decided to turn back one chapter. I've read a story before with the body switching premise and it was horrible! I did read another humorous one that was a gender flopping one (Kagome in Sesshoumaru's body and vice versa), but unfortunately it hasn't been updated. But this...this was a great read. It was interesting from the start and the intrigue never let up. Like an action movie, ne? Well, to me, that's exactly what it felt like. And your take on the wish was thoughtful and very fitting in my underrated opinion. Too many authors don't take the wish that seriously when one's made. It ** me off. If it were that easy then Kikyou would have never died! Great, great story. |
| Tsurara-hime 2006-07-25 ch 15, | abusewow! i finaly finished ur story! gonna read the sequel nw ^^ tsurara-hime |
| Linella 2006-06-30 ch 15, | abuseThat was wonderful. To tell you the truth I never liked the pairing of Kagome and Sesshomaru. But your stroy made it seem right. Like it was ment to be. That was wonderful. I really liked it and i'm glad that you didn't put who the pairing was in the summary. Cause if you did. Them I would have never read your story. Thank you. |