I'd vote no for mpreg, at least in this story. Maybe in the sequel you hinted earlier.

Although, seeing this hasn't been updated in a while, perhaps that isn't even an issue. I hope you're still working on this.

I'm eager to see what you've cooked up from this because a split personality plot is rather difficult to change now that's it's been so much based on.

I'd really like to see the fight in the palace. James shouting at Lily for forcing their son into something she hadn't even thought if it made him happy. And lily shouting at James for pushing Harry outside the safe castle when he could've just as easily cancelled the wedding. :)

I've been waiting for there to be some explanation of how harry's coping with his decease, has he been taught to handle it and how it's affecting his magic but there's been nothing.. Harry hasn't even been using magic

Cho wounded Harry? When did that happen? the girl wasn't even mentioned!
Who dealed with the guards that were supposed to be outside Harry's rooms?

Yay! Love the story, so good. Poor Harry! Duet scares me... Well anyway it should so be mpreg! Yay babies and pregnancy hormones! Well update soon please. =p

Oh yeah, I forgot to ask this in the 1st chapter when i read the story summary but... Why are the Kingdoms' names 'toilet' and 'casetrain' spelt backwards, and an annagram of 'charon'?

Harry has a highly skilled sadistic/homicidal alter ego due to a multipersonality disorder, as shown by the last scene where he happily draws his sword on the 3 Gryffindors, doesn't he?

... That's a long sentence. Go figure.

this is a very well written piece; please tell me you haven't abandoned it, i've borken too many computers that way.

I must compliment you on the continuing plot twists in your fic and how there is always some secret just out of reach that will explain everything in the end. It keeps me hooked. Great job! I love Duet! He is totally psychotic, a sadist, and just plain awesome. Draco's cute because he is a good mixture of cold-hearted bandit and sweet-heart. Harry is also fragile but strong, which I like in fics where Harry is petite and considered weak. Keep up the good work. Hope inspiration and opportunity find you soon. Umm, besides the odd grammar mistake I have no complaints with the fic.

Alright, I'm going to try and leave a good review after reading over your profile!
I absolutely love the idea you have and you have buckets of awesome plot details and twists. I think, with the gore, you might want to bump this up to T (might just be me being squeamish though!) I really didn't like Oliver, so I'm glad he's gone! I love the character depth for Harry and Draco, do you think you could add more history for Draco. I'd really like to read your version of little Draco... Just an idea. As a die hard D/H fangirl,I would like to see more romance and less gore. I love this fic, so I tried to give you lots of advice! Hope it worked, even though I'm sure you don't need it!

I liked it!

I've finished reading all the chapters you've published until now and...I LOVE THIS FIC! *adds to Story Alert and Favs*

I vote for M-PREG!! *_* I can't wait to see Harry get pregnant...he'll look so cute!

YOU'RE BACK! YIPPEE! We didn't cry out for blood in the interim because Duet may have been attracted and that's one "person" the party can do without.

Great chapter-things are moving right along. These "scenes on the other side of the fence" with Voldemort and the Malfoys add a bit more dimension to the world you've crafted.

Am curious to know the exact nature of that potion Wood forced down Harry--does it prevent all pregnancy or just undo Wood's earlier work?

Am still bellowing a resounding YAY! for Mpreg!

Lovely work :D