 InVenT-A-MiLeiSt 2005-11-27 . chapter 1luv it ur good
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 Blackbird 2005-11-17 . chapter 1 Darknessofdawn, Omfg! what a good poem, at some parts you lost me but over all, Great poem! I look foward to seeing more of your work:) |
 RavensTotaldouble 2005-11-15 . chapter 1 I think you did a wonderful job on it. You wrote it right? Hey tell me the answer over email. I think you have a real talent there and should not go to waist. Please read mine as well. Thank you. Bye for now! :-)! |
 The Prime 2005-11-13 . chapter 1*cry* so beat- wait what am i doing here damn you short sterm mermory loss oh ya good story keep writing |
 Invader Hog 2005-11-13 . chapter 1 Awe, that's sad. tear is all i got to say. Jya... |