Okay... The writing's good, but you made Chandler and Monica seem so cruel. You had them talking about their newborn daughter like she was some kind of monster they didn't even want. They don't even act like they love her at all. And I'm pretty sure one day old babies can not smile, much less giggle. And it's really annoying how every time someone talks there's like fifteen italicized words in one sentence.

Heya,

Great story!I can actually imagine them acting them out...

Keep up the good work - please update soon!

Grace x

This is an excellent story, please update!

i love this chapter ... especially the referenrences to julie and especially good old russ.

great work :)

i luv it!

Rachel is not thinking straight about proposing, unless ofcourse Ross says yes.

CONTIINUE!

Mm - interesting. I liked Monica's reaction to the news that she wasn't getting to make the cake - seemed completely in character.

I'd like to have seen Rachel and Julie finally bonding a bit over babies, but you can't have everything. Quite plausible and funny.

You mean there are people out there who need to be *told* who Julie was, and Russ, and for that matter about Ross's rage (a splendid sequence)? What kind of fans are these :)?

Problems here (1) Joey's still in Days of Our Lives. He could certainly go for a play, if it fitted round his schedule, but you give the impression he's like he was at the beginning

(2) I don't see the point of the crazy man, really, and I very much doubt that Chandler would invite him in, considering his memories of Eddie and Mr. Heckles.

great update soon.

Heh, funny. The way they act and talk feels totally right.

this is adorable ...i love the whole conversation of Monica and Chandler freaking out...the R and R was great.

Cute! I hope to see more soon. :-)

Steph

great update soon.

Yes, fine, but ... what about the time when Emma cries and *Monica* is the only one who can stop her. Maybe it's not going to work for her own child.

Actually, though babies can cry at inconvenient times (lots of experience here), they do not usually go on for hours and hours, if only because feeding them shuts them up. But your story worked reasonably well.

(But defin*i*tely, please. At least you didn't write something the spellcheck interpreted as defiantly which seems to happen a lot).