|Reviews for S11 The Events Of Afterwards|
| one fearless wallflower 8/22/12 . chapter 2
Okay... The writing's good, but you made Chandler and Monica seem so cruel. You had them talking about their newborn daughter like she was some kind of monster they didn't even want. They don't even act like they love her at all. And I'm pretty sure one day old babies can not smile, much less giggle. And it's really annoying how every time someone talks there's like fifteen italicized words in one sentence.
| joylesswonder52 8/26/06 . chapter 5
Great story!I can actually imagine them acting them out...
Keep up the good work - please update soon!
| dmtennis1 12/27/05 . chapter 5
This is an excellent story, please update!
| rachgreengeller 12/16/05 . chapter 4
i love this chapter ... especially the referenrences to julie and especially good old russ.
| Dreem 12/12/05 . chapter 5
great work :)
| Lobsters forever 12/12/05 . chapter 5
i luv it!
Rachel is not thinking straight about proposing, unless ofcourse Ross says yes.
| Exintaris 12/12/05 . chapter 5
Mm - interesting. I liked Monica's reaction to the news that she wasn't getting to make the cake - seemed completely in character.
| Exintaris 11/22/05 . chapter 4
I'd like to have seen Rachel and Julie finally bonding a bit over babies, but you can't have everything. Quite plausible and funny.
You mean there are people out there who need to be *told* who Julie was, and Russ, and for that matter about Ross's rage (a splendid sequence)? What kind of fans are these :)?
| Exintaris 11/16/05 . chapter 3
Problems here (1) Joey's still in Days of Our Lives. He could certainly go for a play, if it fitted round his schedule, but you give the impression he's like he was at the beginning
(2) I don't see the point of the crazy man, really, and I very much doubt that Chandler would invite him in, considering his memories of Eddie and Mr. Heckles.
| justawritier 11/16/05 . chapter 3
great update soon.
| tini243 11/15/05 . chapter 2
Heh, funny. The way they act and talk feels totally right.
| rachgreengeller 11/14/05 . chapter 2
this is adorable ...i love the whole conversation of Monica and Chandler freaking out...the R and R was great.
| writergal90 11/14/05 . chapter 2
Cute! I hope to see more soon. :-)
| justawritier 11/14/05 . chapter 2
great update soon.
| Exintaris 11/14/05 . chapter 2
Yes, fine, but ... what about the time when Emma cries and *Monica* is the only one who can stop her. Maybe it's not going to work for her own child.
Actually, though babies can cry at inconvenient times (lots of experience here), they do not usually go on for hours and hours, if only because feeding them shuts them up. But your story worked reasonably well.
(But defin*i*tely, please. At least you didn't write something the spellcheck interpreted as defiantly which seems to happen a lot).