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| CrazygirlHaley5555 2006-04-16 ch 10, | abuseHey,je CSI story is echt goed.LoL. ~Samantha~ |
| Dakota Storm 2005-11-30 ch 8, | abuseoh thats so sweet it made me think of my sis and I and how where so close |
| Adamsgirl 2005-11-26 ch 7, | abuseaww that was really good! omg hahaha Delko's a good river in emergency's!! hahaha you watched Nailed! |
| NadezhdaSt 2005-11-19 ch 5, | abuseWow,really good!I'm adding this both to my favs and to my story alert lists. I'm still a new CSI:Miami fan, but Calleigh already is my favourite character, so I'm enjoying this story immensely-it's excellent.The relationship between the two sisters is done marvelously well, I can't wait to see what happens next. And I sure do hope you haven't killed Aimee(I love this name by the way, it's one of my favourites too).:) You're a damn good writer-keep up the fantastic work. |
| Adamsgirl 2005-11-16 ch 4, | abusedun dun dun du..haha it's funny cause i already know whats next, yet i still come back and read the chpt. you load up...hahaha :p |
| speedfanatic05 2005-11-16 ch 4, | abuseOH My... Aimee is kidnapped! And check out Calleigh! I knew behind that calm demeanor, there lied a beast, lol. Very good on the anger... and the guilt. I know that they are going to get her back. Just one question, if Ryan didn't tell the reporter, then who did? |
| speedfanatic05 2005-11-16 ch 3, | abuseIt's amazing how you have captured this antagonizing relationship of theirs. I stand at awe of this... Where did Aimee go? |
| speedfanatic05 2005-11-16 ch 2, | abusethat chapter was chocked full of suspense and you weren't even looking for a suspect or anything. That was great how you expressed the strained relationship between the two sisters, and it really makes me want to get to know what happened ... I love this story, so much so that it's going in myfavs... Bravo! |
| bubbles4eva 2005-11-15 ch 3, | abusereally like your story. keep it up. |
| Alyson69 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abusegood story for a first try. will you be continuing? It would be interesting to find out why the sisters haven't been in touch for so long, and how Aimee fits into the team. Keep up the good work. Alyson |
| frank 2005-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abusewhy does it hav 2 b in miami why can't it b in japna or in Ecuador or for that matter in France |
| Adamsgirl 2005-11-14 ch 2, | abusewoot :) hey you need to hurry up and post the next 2 chpt. i know u got them... ;) hahaha |
| speedfanatic05 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseawesome, Calleigh has a sister, and she is a bullet girl too! I can't wait to get into the dynamics of their relationship, it seems complicated. Look forward to reading more! |
| Adamsgirl 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abusewoot! this is great...i'm glad you finally put it up..can't wait for the next installment... |