You can't leave me hanging!

Gimme gimme more...

Hurry...my brain is melting...melting...hehehehehehehe

Ok, for real, update soon!

Poor Buck.

I mean really, Poor Buck.

It seems Tsion understands a little. But...what's Buck gonna do when...you know...after Carpathia...isn't Carpathia anymore? someone needs to bring this up to him...soon...

^_^ omg left behind fanfiction!! This is so cute! I love Buck so much. Your being really evil. In love with the anti-christ?! That doesn't mean I don't like it tho. I can't wait till you update so I can read more! Your story is great!

As much as I despise Chloe with every fibre of my being...the first part of that actually made me laugh. No mean feat I tell you. For a few seconds I didn't hate the gal.

Last line too, excellent. My favourite parts of this chapter, though it's all good. Novel to see Tsion in a fic, and nicely IC.

"Disgust colored his voice, though Ray tried not to let it" ...and I can see this like it's a scene from one of the movies playing in my head.

And the ultimate virtue, you can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Since the characters are written so compellingly.

I simply *had* to review this.

Buck might not have winced but I certainly did. In fact I read most of the chapter with my hands half in front of my eyes. I couldn't help just feeling totally in the moment here. And totally empathising with Buck too (luckily Buck is not as easily rattled as me!)

Also the bit where Ray chokes on his fish burger is pretty darn ace. Oh, and their reaction is spot on too! I can see that Ray and Chloe fastening on to an explanation/solution like that straight away.

Ah! I was waiting for this...and it really goes without saying that I'm not dissapointed. Of course it's totally the opposite, I love it.
What a cliffhanger eh? It's great reading the way Cameron's dealing with everything so far. I would have said it was impossible to write something like this but you found a way and a half!