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| Lunarobi Pride 2008-02-25 ch 1,  | abuse*claps madly* So I'm not alone, eh? Good! TOMOSxNABILE FOREVER! Wonderfully written, too!! |
| Aurora 2007-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is really good! The LDP ending was terrible. Tomos just sort of faded out, they never said what happened to him at the end. This portrays very well how I imagine Tomos would feel. |
| Arle Nadja 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuse...That was wonderful. It's too bad that TNT doesn't put this kind of stuff in their plots, more people would look at them. So, I gives it a 10/10. :3 |
| RuffTrigger1298 2006-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like Tomos/Nabile so why in the world did she end up with that 'prince' huh. Huh! Makes me so mad at the team... |
| Salacassera 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm a bit late, but... This was pretty amazing. You showed Tomos in a totally different light than the goofy way he was portrayed in the plot, and did an awesome job writing how he felt. |
| Shard.EXE 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was... nice. =) Glad to see I'm not the only one who supports Nabile/Tomos. Seriously, she reads one sad story about Jazan and immediately falls in love? Sorry, I ain't buying it. >_ |
| Marlfox 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, I love this. It's how I think Tomos feels, just for TNT to toss him out. And I HATED. H. A. T. E. D. HATED, the ending! I was hoping for a T/N and a J/A (don't ask why). But, anyways, great story. Very well set. |
| Return Of Itsy 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseVereh good. |
| Shanima 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseOh wow this is really good. It dragged through the middle slightly, but I really understood how Tomos felt :D Great story! |
| Windfox 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseYou hit the nail on the head. The ending to the LDP Plot sucked. Flat-out sucked. The sad thing is that everything that was expected happened, and yet TNT's plot writers managed to royaly screw it up. As far as I am concered, this story is the ending for the plot. TNT could have had a confrontation with Nabile and Tomos after the wedding. They could have explained how Nabile suddenly fell in love with Jazan. They could have made a plot with depth. But they didn't, and we have to settle for mediocrity. Maybe TNT will realize that they made a crappy ending. Maybe they will resolve to make better plots. Maybe we will never again be left wondering why TNT has left us to dry. And maybe birds will fly out of my pants. Sorry if it seems like I'm using my review of your story to vent at TNT(and I am). This really is a great story though, you did an excellent job at capturing Tomos' point of view of the plot, and his emotions were sqaure on the mark. I was gonna write something like this on my own, but I'm glad you beat me to it, this is much better than anything that I could have come up with. I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for taking the time to write it. |
| PheonixRiser 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseSorry Tomos, but Nabile'smarried now, and there is nothing that you can do about it, Except we can! -wink- Wow, that story is more angstier than my so-called life!! You are so good!! Please review for my story "Holidays Around Neopia" You'll like it! |