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Georgia
2009-06-10 . chapter 6
elves having wings? seriously? and using modern talk? tsk tsk tsk.
Yoda's Padawan
2006-07-24 . chapter 5
MORE!
Optimus: you're obsessed.
Why, yes. Yes I am.
Optimus: She loved it, wants more, hurry and update or she'll call the Transformers on you.
What he said. :D
Lady Sorciere
2006-04-22 . chapter 5
I'm too lazy to log in. You're back! YAY! THis was an interesting chapter. Are angry mobs really that stupid? Well, I have to go wake my sister up. I am so glad you're back!
Samantha-Girl Scout
2006-04-18 . chapter 5
o well you should... you should... CONTINUE OR ELSE!! (FYI I only say conitnue or else to good stories... and this isn't... its GREAT!
One Night Only
2005-12-25 . chapter 4
Ohola, First time reading. Pretty well done, Since I'm a fan of the whole Robin Hood story, My dad bought me Robin Hood Prince of Thieves(with Kevin Costner and Alan Rickman). I cried when my Man died(Alan Rickman). So yeah, Now I'm into reading Robin Hood fan fics.
Lady Sorciere
2005-12-24 . chapter 4
Finally! I have been waiting for, like, forever! YAY! Will did not kill her! So, her wings are clipped and her ankle is sprained. Poor girl! Well, I am very happy that you finally posted this. I might be posting something soon. Well, later, and update sooner than last time!
Seize the Day!
Samantha-Girl Scout
2005-12-22 . chapter 4
*folds her arms and pouts* NOT FAIR!! any way CONTINUE OR FEAR MY RATH!
Samantha-Girl Scout
2005-11-28 . chapter 3
i remeber this part! *shudders*
Lady Sorciere
2005-11-28 . chapter 3
No! I hate cliffhangers! They can't kill her! Man, this is gonna be a distracted day at school. Update soon! I gotta go, or there'd be more. Points for longer chapters!
Seize the Day!
skrblr
2005-11-28 . chapter 3
Not bad! Now we're starting to get people (Will and Less don't count. Main characters never do). I think I caught a glimpse of the bunnies, but I'm not sure-- it could've been my little sister (just kidding--don't hurt me Becca). So. Are we soon to see the significance of the little black kitten? Oh--and whether or not Less dies (methinks she won't, or 'twill be a rather short story). That's all until you write another chapter (so make it quick)! Yay for parentheses! And Billie Jo Bob the Puppet.
Lady Sorciere
2005-11-25 . chapter 2
I like this idea. I LOVE Elves! So, update soon, 'cause I want to know what happens.
Seize the Day!
The Angsting Wench
2005-11-24 . chapter 2
ARGH.

This story *reeks* of Mary Sue-ness. It reeks like a garbage dump full of dung and dead fish that has been drying out under the hot, Sahara sun for a hundred years.

I want less of Less.

And yes, I am proud to have my flames used for the killing of rabid bunnies.

Them, and all the Mary Sues in the world.
Samantha-Girl Scout
2005-11-22 . chapter 2
i'm not gonna give you any flames but i'd like to see this thone that you say that you have... lol also its really good i'm glad you finally posted this story like i said before. also... will you pose more stories? PLEASE! even though i've never read them they'll proably be as good as this one!
skrblr
2005-11-22 . chapter 2
Oh good. I just love those bunnies--I'm almost tempted to give them a flame, just to bring them out to look at. But I won't! Okey dokey (according to my seminary teacher, it's Okey Dokey as an exclamation, and okey-dokey as an adjective. Yay for Mormon seminary teachers!). Okey Dokey. Well. He's not Robin, but that's okay. Is he Will Scarlet or one of the others? I guess that's another thing we'll find out soon enough. Cliffhangers...
It's interesting to have the Merry Men in a story with an elf. I think there a few other such tales, but yours is still very well written. Carry on!
skrblr
2005-11-14 . chapter 1
I have rather liked it so far. Many unanswered questions, plus a very mean and awful cliffhanger (it just makes me love it all the more), and an odd mention of pink rabid Earth bunnies. It wasn't bad at all--the story, that is. Yes, we are indeed getting back on track. Are we meant to assume that the emerald-eye guy is Robin Hood, as well as the mythical hero sung of? I very much look forward to future chapters; keep it up!
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