A sad but great story. I wish you'd write more about her.

This was very well written.

Very poetic in a sense. The desire and hatred thing was made very clear. Not to mention that you made Naraku as evil as he was meant to be.

I praise this story. Thank you for the wonderful read.

very very good. I am a fan of Naraku/ Kagura fics. I love how you did the whole desire/hatred thing. Very well written.

wow, this story is so sad, yet good. i cant believe Kagura really died in the manga.T_T

anyways, this was a nice story.

Very interesting. I've always found Kagura an interesting character.