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Reviews For: For Two

iSteph 2007-12-16 ch 7,	abusePoor Allegra! I really hope you continue to update this story. Seriously it is so much better then half the crap on the ssx section.
Honey D 2007-04-20 ch 7, anon.	abuseaw, poor allegra. at least she can hang out with viggo. can't wait for the next chapter!
CrazeeFfan 2007-04-20 ch 7,	abuseAwesomeness! I've just read through your story and I have to say it's really good. The characters personality's are all really disitnct and well-defined, the plot is interesting (and also brings to light a more realistic element, like people actually getting tired!) and you write so well! I like your Allegra. You're mean to her in a sort of "I like her but I'm still mean to her anyway". Lots of people seem to make their favourite character win. I'm sort of hoping Psymon or Kaori wins, so then one of the characters who hasn't had a POV yet wins. It was a very enjoyable read. I hope you don't take too long to update. I want to know who wins God darn it!
Apothecary 2006-06-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseZowie, gets better & better! The image of Elise trying to prod her brain out of a gutter (with a broom handle in my interpretation) as it hisses and snarls back at her shall linger on... ditto to the inverted Atomika bit Proj On!
Gleeful Melancholy 2006-06-01 ch 6,	abuseAre you shitting me? I swear I already favorited this thing, and it probably cancelled out after doing it a couple times. reconstructing is horible! That FS Monster sounds deliciously hideous. Okay, back to business. YAY! I'm really glad this fic is up and running...I've been waiting for a great SSX update for a VERY long time. This is what I do when I get home. lol you had even more unique metaphors, like that vomit-esque snow. Um, I actually forgot that you have a way with inner dialogue, and how you make third person POV more personal and seem like first person. Elise's inner ramblings are hella funny and spot on. It makes the story really rich and the characters more fun to interact with. I think I've already mentioned that this could easily be in the canon SSX world, if that game had any plot or substance. :P Then there was that distinct switch from Elise POV to Viggo POV, which was awesome. I was rooting for him, and let it be known that I close to hate Psymon. BUT PLEASE! Enough with the broken double cliffhangers or whatever, I want to know who wins! jk Keep it coming, --Red--
Charshi 2006-03-28 ch 5,	abuseXD I should stop having the strange haunting feeling that Viggo was staring at Psymon because he had taken his hot dog and started waving it around like it was a sabre. 8D Mac. -insert fangirl drool here- ...Sorry. XD I really, truly am. Really. All the relationships are perfect. You got them down just right. Psymon's neutral to Zoe, JP's competitive with Moby, Moby's partial to Zoe AND Elise without them getting into a bitchfit over him, and Mac's over there and everyone's just fine with that. (in a varying degree.) Elise wondering if Viggo was perfect made me squeal loudly. (What? HE IS! A little narcissistic, but I know who can fix that. =D -lame excuse for a slashy innuendo-) Psymon would SO stroke the door handle. And shriek something involving donkeys to old ladies. ...Actually, he'd do a lot of things... I'm here for ya. =D and eagerly awaiting your next chapter. =D
Gleeful Melancholy 2006-03-28 ch 5,	abuseHey there! Just caught up on this story, and I still really love the description and mindsets of your characters. The switching POV keeps it interesting and unpredictable, and the Allegra chapter was hilarious. You made that girl particularly dumb and likeable. XD Zoe and Moby's dynamic is incredible, and I thought it was funny how the Canadians were the only ones brave enough to stand up to them. Thanks for the shout out to my fic! I immediately thought of Haze when you put in that part about the intoxicating scent. I guess you think about how good he might smell about as much as I do, lol. What with the JP cameos, I'm just happy to see him in another fic where he might have a real role...whereas mine is pretty much an ode to his hotness. lol Keep writing! --Red--
Charshi 2006-03-13 ch 4,	abuseHAHAH! You made Atomika blonde too!? -looks at her chapter 4- ...=D... He's scrawny, looks like a surfer, and he's blonde... wtf... Great minds think alike? (In mine, he's more laid back... but eh) Anyway, lots to say about this fic. Love the Viggo/Allegra stuff there. I hate Allegra. Most of the time. I'm slowly getting over that. I use to hate Nate like a mofo. xD (And uh. I obviously love him now) But Viggo/Allegra is a nice sort of pairing. It's like Mac/Kaori. I'd go for it. Srsly. laol. XD And and and and THE MAC CHARACTERIZATION. AIIEIE MAC
Charshi 2006-02-28 ch 3,	abuseYou unslashed my slashed characters! The stars of my newest fic! The ones that kept me occupied during one-hour and thirty five minutes of PARABOLAS! -dramatic pause- Naw. I love you. XD I did have to squeal and have a(rare) fangirl moment when you wrote down that Viggo thought he could take down Nate. He's quite a bit more masculine in here then how I portray him. Of course, maybe he's putting that act up for Elise. Skanky. Hahah. I kid. Your chapters give me tingles. They're still so well written, and YOU tell me my fics are well-paced. XDD I like this story/fanfic/thinggummy. Plus, Viggo is sexy. ...Not as sexy as Mac, though. ...Hey, guess who my favorite character is! XDD I really do hope you continue this, though. Poor Eddie will be livid with ENVY when he finds out. ...Or at least, he should be. -shifty eyes- I think DeviantArt makes me write long comments.
Charshi 2006-02-27 ch 2,	abuseNATE. NATE. HEHEHEHE. Uh, sorry. NATE! =D -shot.- I love Nate. I mean like. A brother. The only person I'd like to REALLY clinglatch to for-frickin'-ever is Mackenzie Fraser himself, but uh. Sh. You have a brilliant way of writing. XD Much better than what is usually shot up here on SSX. Elise, honestly, used to get on my nerves a little, but she's a nice girl and all. She's pretty, smart, and she has skill. And I could stand her paired up with characters I usually slash. I'll have to watch this story, now. And, by the way, thanks for your comment on my fic. =D I like getting meaningful reviews. They give me the fuzzies. ...8D Everyone loves Nate.
Gleeful Melancholy 2006-02-20 ch 2,	abuselol, that's cool, I'm just kidding. I had my dictionary out this time. :P I'm so glad to see this back up again, and..! Is that Nate/Elise foreshadowing?! This story is getting crazy juicy really fast. I also like who you made friends with Elise; that's kind of how I imagined it too. Wow. I love Nate. Just thought I'd get that off my chest. He really is "pure, unadulterated hotness in a cowboy hat" (loved that description!) He seemed a tad snarkier than most writers portray him, but it's a cool change and definitely fits with the lonely cowboy image. Nice chapter. Eagerly awaiting the next one! --Red--
Nicole 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is a great start, can't wait for the next chapter :)
NA 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really enjoyed that, the description was greata nd everyone was in character :) Please eupdate
Bedroom Dancing 2005-11-19 ch 1,	abusethis is cute. i really like stories with eddie and elise because, togehter, they make a really fun atmosphere for fics. update soon! :)
Gleeful Melancholy 2005-11-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great start. Too bad all the good writers have short chapters! j/k I definitely can't wait to see where this is going...I don't see a whole lot of Elise stories up here anymore, and I totally agree with you about the On Tour thing. What I worried about most with that game coming out was that everyone would be making Mary-Sue self insertion fics, which I despise and flame liberally. And all the good people were eliminated from the league. One thing though...there are some slow people on this site just like me, and I think your story would benefit from less big words, you smart freak. XD jkjk Anyways, update soon! --Red--

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