This is a good story. It has a good supence.

Good Job :)

It's a good story I advise you to continue! I like the ending of it especilly

Is that all! That can't be all! You have to continue this! It's great!-Tarren

i like it i love t/r fics!

I LIKE THE PART ABOUT TENCHI and RYOKO MATTER AS A FACT LOVED IT! BUT, RYOKO WOULD NEVER DO SUCH A THING.EVEN THOUGH I HATE AYEKE UH THAT SNOBBISH PRINCESS POOP!

Good work with Ayeka :)

Very nice. Ending sucks major portions of ass.

While an interesting read the Star Wars merger doesn't work for me. Primarly because the tenchology Kagato, Dr. Clay, and Washu all have/had makes the Death Star look like a popgun. Similarlly the goddess-like powers Ryoko has from her gems would make her next to impossible to 'replace'. In short Tenchi would in all likelyhood wind up the Emperor of the Empire with Ryoko as the real power behind the throne creating a much different Empire than tha tint he films.

Two WEEKS later?Thats a bit rushing it don't ya think?

i like it!i love it!i love ryokotenchi fics U rule

I dunno, I guess that this was okay but I don't really like Star Wars... The twist was kinda weird, but a suggestion: Ryoko turns traitor? Just an idea.

The Star Wars crossover was a bad idea. It was written ok, but the plot just didn't make sense to me. I'm a fan of dark fics, but this one was poorly executed.

L. Outlaw(stunned): Good, God! That was your BEST work? O_O \ Jim: Boy, you DO suck!