So, this isn't the real Puffy, but the Hi Hi version, right? To answer your question, hi is actually spelled hai, which is Japanese for yes. I think you know that. You used actual dates! "Kaz murmured a Japanese insult that is best left untranslated." Hee hee... Does it begin with "b" or "a"? The lyrics to Ajia no Junshin! And I'll use the last part for karaoke! I've been trying to find lyrics to the full song since I heard it on the CD! Unfortunately, I can't fully understand the words because of their accent (No offense at all, Puffy!) Oh... It's nani? I thought it was "nori."

I loved it. I'm a huge puffy fan, and it was a good story. You are a very good writer. Very, very nice. Touching and also seems almost real. I like that in a story.

GET YOUR LAZY ** BACK TO YOUR STORY "The Virus" AND GIVE IT A PROPER ENDING! eg Mewtwo and Biyomon getting together.

I like this story alot. A LOT!!

Yep...yep, this is how Time-Warner MIGHT conceive a live-action/animated feature version of "Hi Hi Puffy Ami Yumi" [i.e., having the "real" Ami & Yumi morph into their animated counterparts {using their cartoon voices} whenever there's a "fantastic" sequence or a significant plot development]...I can see the moment where BOTH "Kaz's" meet on screen for the first time ("Hey, I don't look like that!"/
"If I were you, I would hide my face in shame, also...although you DO have a bit more hair up top than I.."/LIVE-YUMI: "Would you two CUT IT OUT?? You're holding up the plot!! You can make notes on each other after the movie!!"/ANI-YUMI: "I LIKE her!
She's got GUTS..."/LIVE-YUMI: "You shut up, too!!"/ANI-YUMI: "Hey! Do you know WHO you're talking to??"/ANI-AMI: "SHUT UP, ALL OF YOU!"/REAL-AMI: *amazed* "Cool!!").

Very good, 'Seth'! VERY GOOD!

:)

good story. im a fan of ami and yumi myself.and thanks for teaching me the words to the entire song

That rocked...beyond all imagination...Incredible.

That was an awesome story!

Hey, this was FUN and pretty GOOD...Excellent fic...I love Hi Hi Puffy Ami Yumi!! But I think it would be nice to put some romance spice in it...Heehee..just kidding...

Wow that was a great fanfic man! I bet if you some how submit it yo the ones who created The HiHi Puffy AmiYumi Show they could make it into an episode (Just an idea)but any way god job just keep on making good Fanfics.

It's good, but I think you should adjust the rating on the story...noticed a few examples of language.

I like the story, though. Very well done.

this story is awesome!! this is my first time reading a ami yumi fan fic. where do you get the japanese phases!?!?!

Excellent! Plz update soon!

Me Likey!Me Likey! Ah!Thanks For writing the words to the highlow streetshows paparazzi flashbulbs part! (=

Hey that was awesome! Surprisingly, this is the first Hi-Hi fic I've seen in the anime section!

I love 'origin' stories and it really captured the emotions (and trivias) of the girls!

Good to find another Hi Hi fan amongst us..

~Kyo

Even though I hate this show...I like this fanfic. Good job!!