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YodaReincarnate 4/28/13 . chapter 30 Hiya! THAT WAS A BEYOOTIFUL ENDING TO THIS FUCKING AMAZING STORY! :):):):):) You should do a sequel with Remy trying to sabotage Bekka's relationship with the help of the youngest LeBeau son. Just a kinda One shot type thing mebbe in Remy's POV and at the end there could be a little fluffy monologue about how Remy don't want her to grow up! It would be the sweetest thing EVER! ! |
all.those.stars 1/3/13 . chapter 1 Hi! This is a really interesting concept for an AU, and so far, I really like the story line. However, there were some things that stood out to me (obviously just for future reference, since you've completed the fic). Although I can tell that you're trying to bring in the southern accents, at times it detracts from the work itself (this is a major pet peeve for me but probably doesn't matter as much to others). Also, "y'all," is a contraction for "you all," and therefore should not be used like, "Yah'll are a very busy woman"; that would just be "you," singular. Overall: very strong start! |
Guest 11/13/12 . chapter 24 haaa that chapter was hilarious. i loved remy and rogue's cat and mouse scenario in that scene. and it payed off, he finally caught her. i found this fiction earlier today, it really sucked me in...probably wont sleep till ive finished this story now. |
deadsylifer 1/22/12 . chapter 30this is the first fanfic ive read that wasnt avatar. i really liked it, you did a really good job. thanks for posting it! |
deadsylifer 1/21/12 . chapter 20it made sense... it also made me cry... |
deadsylifer 1/21/12 . chapter 7wow i get the feeling that you really dont like cyclops lmao |
deadsylifer 1/21/12 . chapter 2i swear its like you know gambit is my favorite cartoon after zuko and you are just trying to kill me lol great job! |
deadsylifer 1/21/12 . chapter 1i swear its like you know gambit is my favorite cartoon after zuko and you are just trying to kill me lol great job! |
Hope Hannigan 6/14/11 . chapter 30My gawd... I stayed up all night to read this... It's 6.30AM here... I laughed so hard in the end... Poor Alex, he'll be eaten alive by Bekka, if she's anything like her mom. Loved this story thoroughly. Hugs, Hopey |
LuckedClover 2/16/11 . chapter 30hey, loved it and sequal? great plot and character personalities. and al;so that in the beginning you had there powers as lokes kinder, like 'you sucking the energy from the room' and 'its like she can read minds' loved it. Ttfn |
splattermusic 10/23/10 . chapter 1I love your story! It had an amazing ending and you should write a sequel about Bekka and Alex! |
mrphishie 9/22/10 . chapter 30Eeeeeeeeeeeee! Carrotman! This was possibly the best thing I could do while laying in bed all day, being sick. It didn't really help my cold when I cried at the sad parts, but HOORAY! YOU ARE AWESOME! |
AMYume 6/6/09 . chapter 1 Let me just begin by saying, this fic is INCREDIBLE. I finally finished reading it, and I had to review just to tell you that I loved it. The ending was perfect- Leaving us wishing for more, but still loving the story enough to be ok with it stopping there. Thanks for the ride- A. |
DarkBombayAngel 5/19/09 . chapter 30I love it. Really good. Really love the ending. - |
Iryl 5/10/09 . chapter 11Dramatic! |