...I was just rereading this. Because I love Key so much, yeah.

this is awsome! but 4 some reason it feels like a screen play for a show or movie... well in my pov. but this good hope u continue!

this story is awsome! im putting it in my fave stories! and like i said in all the other reviews that i put in other stories... i wish i could make a good story ;_; but still, its awsome!

I think 'lazy' works best for you, because I have enjoyed this fic more than most I have read, and trust me, I've read the cream of the crop from more than one site. I enjoy the 'choppy' style, and I find that it is a refreshing change from description after description. I like your sporadic spacing because it stresses points and provides easy readability. I especially like your OC 'emo-kid'. XD He is too awesome! (Not as in "He is awesome beyond the point of still being good.", but "He is just so flippin awesome!) When I read the description, I honestly hoped that this would be an oc fic. I guess I'm just that type of person. So, whatever you do, don't kill this story before it's lived a full life! Oh! And Key? Don't be so bleak. You'll find where you belong. We all do someday.

Sorry I took a bit to review this! x_x
ANYWAY, onto my review, which was a long time in waiting...
Your writing style is so GOOD - the grammar's perfect, it's clean, it's easy to read. Tis why I adore this story.

*Yawns* Awesome fic, oh by the way Sumi told me to read and reveiw so I did. I think you're doing a great job with this fic and I hope it continues. Naru! (Nekomi and Dark say the fic is a success)I am Nekomi if you haven't already guessed. But I enjoyed your fic!

This is not a review.

XD Nah. I loved it! I love Key!

Key's friendship with Sora (if you let me call it that) is developing so well! Well, Key's still kind of cold and distant, but he has his reasons eh?
You capture Sora so perfectly. Seriously, one of the most in-character Soras ever.
I hope he keeps on talking x3

you know what.. make infection, into epidemic...lol

Cliffhangers are like an infection, a heartless. If there are too many of them, people REALLY wanna get past them... (( Ok that was kind of lame...ok, ok it was really lame))

WEell anyway, while I try to find something better to say... Update soon!

Yay! Key TALKED. and I promise I'll help more next time!

>; Key's way more interesting than Sachiel...so yeah. I can't wait until the next chapter!

IT'S PERFECTION, AS USUAL.
I love Key and everything about him. and Sora's simple want to help him

This is a really great story! I like it a lot! It's quite fun and done well. My only piece of constructive criticism is that the lines of description text are very short and it almost sems more like a poem then a story. Try combining some lines together to make longer paragraphs! ^^ It kind of gets annoying that my eyes have to jump from line to line to line to line to line for ideas that don't really need to be seperated.

Lovely story! Continue please!

-Sammy

WHOAMG! it's friday the 13th,and BAD STUFF HAPPENED! :o Hope Key and Sora are a-ok! Well, as much as they can be in the current situation. :D
Muahaha, I'm going to review like every chapter. >:D I check this EVERY DAY. U CEN NOT XKAP!11