Great story! But just to tell you Cyborg doesn't say "musn't"

if only they had attacked on monday! -'

I'm finally reviewing. You know my beef with some of the way you wrote the certain parts, but for the most part I can follow the story and am excited to read more from this story.

Keep on Smiling

S2S

Steve- Glad we could be of some help with your fic, and thanx for the shout-out. I'll be looking forward to see how the story develops, and I'd be more than happy to help out again.

In short, great job, and keep up the good work.

This is pretty funny! I'm sure this is going to be one crazy story!

I loved Raven's thought, it was so like her, not even concerned about the danger they were facing! Keep it up!

Mm, jellybean monsters...they ARE original. Here's to hoping that Oriole does not become a Mary Sue but owns nonetheless. :)

TINA

wel, actually your name isnt tina but anyway-

WRITE MORE! but your story is kindof hard to read and make sense of- oh well. im ur friends so i understand you- just try and make it easier to read ok?

did J&S help you?