nice fic!...brazilian fan !

I re-read this story a couple times each each year (I think since 2005). I love your story. And it's about time I thank you for it, so THANK YOU. A beautiful alternative to the tragic Anakin/Padme saga, but also an excellent Star Wars epic on its own. I really wish I had a paperback copy of this on my bookshelf. I mean, I don't read this as a fanfiction, but as a star wars novel-it's just that good. The plot as a given, I also like the style of writing you use; it's not too concentrated in one area and lets the story flow and unfold through the narrative, dialogue, and the perspective of different characters without distractions. I can see this realistically as a Star Wars movie-the storytelling style is very similar and you've done a great job detailing its amazing universe. And so now I'm about to begin this again, for like the 23rd time. It never gets old. Just thought I'd show my gratitude first (and finally). Keep on keepin' on, Dude. I'mma keep on readin' on.

I really loved this story and can't wait for 'Prophecy: Beyond Good & Evil' but I saw that you haven't posted it yet. I hope you can soon! I'll be looking :D You are a really good writer.

oh i like this preview! i hope you post it soon. i'll be reading this ;)

Hello,

I just read ur story, and I have to say it was AMAZING! I really do hope u contuine with ur writing, as I love it. Thank you very much

I really liked this story. Anakin wasn't too 'goody goody' but he wasn't too brooding and angry either. I really did love the little hit about Luke (of course technically it could be Leia). I'd maybe have liked to have gotten a glimpse of the twins alive, but then the way you ended the story was magnificent and I wouldn't want you to change it. Half the battle of writing is to not rush and knowing when to stop.

Oh, and yes. A blank page is very intimidating.

Is this and AniPadme Pairing? I hope so.

I LOVE her response at the end. Spoken like a true Queen and diplomat!

I really like the story so far and the flirting is so worthy of actually being part of star wars but its somewhat new that we see Padmé as having more affection towards him instead of the other way around.

dawwww the ending was so cute! it took me a while to finish this because of the holidays but im glad that i did. this was a great story and so touching! im glad it had a happy ending :)

I love your story...

Very very good...

This was a great story! I'm looking forward to Dark Shroud :)

I would love to read the Story it sounds interesting )

Good.

This preview is intriguing as hell. I can't wait to read the actual story.