i absolutly luved it

no...*wipes away tears* Hunter's gone and...poor Blake... they're so close. It's not fair! (I normally don't like sad endings but it 's fitting for this story) This story was really sad but beautifully written and with a perfect ending that made me cry.

Ok. i loved it and didn.t I loved the story. Well done in describing everything and the journey was amazing. I didn't like the sad ending, but only because I don't like sad endings. So don't take it personally on your work. It doesn't effect what I think of this fic, and I loved this fic.

Keep up the amazing work. :)

So incredibly sad, but the ending was fitting. Good job!

aw... such an amazing ending.
i just love this story :D

aw... that sucks that he had to die twice :(
awesome story :D

*sob!* loved it!

Cool story, very riveting and touching till the end. But uh, kinda depressing ending though. Understandable, though I was kinda hoping against hope that Hunter will survive. Very well written, poignant and you capture everyone's emotions wonderfully. Great writing.

Wow.

I am speechless.

Amazing ending.

Perfect.

Okay, when I first saw that you had the next chapter up, I was...well happy because I had wanted to read the next chapter for a long time. But then I realized that it was the last and Hunter was gone and I suddenly found myself not wanting to read it.

I was at work when I read it otherwise tears would have kept coming for quite some time, however I had to stop every couple of lines in order to stop myself from crying.

I really wish Hunter had lived, but I know that due to the story he couldn't.

This chapter was, well I can really only express it as such: beautifully amazing.

I love the description and the goodbyes. And the part that made me want to cry the most was the Blake stuff because Hunter and Blake are, just, it's hard to think of one without the other.

I loved the words on his tomb, where are they from?

I really hate character deaths, what posessed me to read this, well, I wish that I hadn't but I'm really glad I did.

Thank you for such an amazing story. Although it is horribly sad and depressing, you did an amazing job.

Sorry this is so long, I'll end it here. Thanks and wonderful story.

Excellent ending to a excellent story!

What an excellent final chapter. Sensei's eulogy was very moving, and your portayal of everyone's emotions was very poignant and touching. Action and death scenes can easily be overplayed, but you brought out the team's grief very skilfully.
Blake's love declaration to Tori at the end was a great additional touch! I was also astounded at the quote at the end. I don't know which book it's from, but it's amazingly fitting! You chose well!
Great job on the entire story. Definitely a fic you can be proud of!
Greetings from Dany

Excellent chapter. It is a shame that Hunter had to die a second time (sniff) but it was the only way to save Blake. Please update soon.

Oh man, this better not be the last chapter! I was really, really hoping something good would come would come out from this chapter. Please, Hunter can't die!!

And oh, great job on the chapter, hehe.

Excellent! Well worth the wait!! BTW, good luck on the exams, the kempo grading and the play!