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derangedfangirl
2008-06-19
ch 2,
abuse:(

I assume this is abandoned? Aw...

Longer chapters less frequently, by the way, would be my vote.
psamiad
2007-08-07
ch 2,
abuseAWESOME STORY! Why did you abandon it?
Archer14
2007-02-25
ch 2,
abuseIt looks like it has been a while since you updated this one. It's good! Come back and finish it for us, please!
vikixo
2006-07-10
ch 2,
abuseeek! I LOVE this! (L)
can't wait for another chapter!
: ] xx
JacobedRose
2006-04-15
ch 2,
abuseI don't care if the updates are longer or shorter, but I hope you continue this soon!
Reid's Girl
2006-02-27
ch 1,
abuseJust so you know, Gideon isn't in charge of the BAU team, Hotchner is.
TheBrownRecluse
2006-02-26
ch 2,
abusei don't like this tina girl. come on, give more credit to poor little spence! he's my torture bishie, not to be made fun of. i'll keep reading though. hopefully you'll redeem yourself. (i don't mean to sound bitchy...sorry)
lallyb1743
2006-01-19
ch 2,
abuseThis could get interesting. I just don't think she should be in charge.
2CoyoteBlue
2005-12-29
ch 2,
abuseHotchner is actually in charge of the BAU team, not Gideon.

The concept is a good one, but your characters are very Out Of Character - yes, you lead off saying that Morgan's going to be a big baby, but Hotchner? Dude, don't make Hotchner have the emotional maturity of a grade-schooler. He's *Hotch*.

And no adult should be behaving like this Mary Sue. She's childish and full of herself - so Mary Sue-ish that I was turned off for good by the end of chapter two.
Jillie chan
2005-12-03
ch 2,
abuseCan I ask for medium length chapters in a reasonable amount of time? See you soon.
Nicholas Curee
2005-12-01
ch 2,
abuseWell, from what you have written here, you are off to quite a good start. Actually I am amazed that so many people have already started posting. I was on here just the other day and it was only one author and they had two stories posted, now we're up to thirteen, yipee!

Anyway, anything that you feel comfortable with posting is fine, after all it is your story and you should be the ones who decides when you realese the chapters. Idaelly, you want long chapters, fairly frequently, but that is an ideal that will never come to pass, for we are mere humans, not machines.

Do what you can, and remember that as long as you are happy with how it comes out that that is all that matters.
coldfiredragon
2005-11-29
ch 2,
abuseFrequent short chapters are fine by me. :D I like your stories. Keep writing new ones and updating the old. I think this new girl is exactly what Spence needs around.
Melismata Maiden
2005-11-22
ch 2,
abuseWhat a fun and charming story! It's good to know that other people have gotten as strangely obsessed with this show as I have. And besides, it's fun to watch Spencer get uncomfortable.
Zoe
2005-11-17
ch 2, anon.
abuseGood story, I like it! this is really good. I vote for more updates!
Lily of the Shadow
2005-11-15
ch 2,
abuseshort is fine ^^

lol... a house right out of someone's happy place... now that right there is indicative of some serious mental issues, possibly drug-associated, in itself XD

hehe... poor spence, partnered with this firecracker. he's gonna have some adjusting to do XD
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