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LilNinjaWolf
2009-06-15 . chapter 3
Great chapter. This fic is really good. Just like Recovery was. Can't wait for the next update and hope you can soon!
a fan
2008-03-21 . chapter 3
Ok got to put a review from 2008 in here. But really I just read this and Recovery today...not in that order, :o). Wow...just wow. Though you have big gaps between updates on Retribution it all fits together nicely.

Great story, great read.


Thanks for sharing
Luna Eva Hamato
2007-07-21 . chapter 1
good
myown262
2007-06-23 . chapter 3
This is really good, you totally have to write another chapter..please write another chapter and soon
lena
2007-05-15 . chapter 3
I've been trying to figure out how to write something with major leo angst... and now I see i don't, cause the one you've written is everything and more. Wow! Really good job. 'Recovery' was awesome, and I can't wait to see you finish this! Keep it up, it really is good.
999999999
2006-10-24 . chapter 3
wow! awesome! please update soon!- by te looks of it you haven't in a while- so please do so soom!
Splitbeak
2006-09-24 . chapter 3
cool.
Neatsue
2006-06-27 . chapter 3
Wow this is great and it gets better with each chapter. Please hurry and finish the next one.
Okami1
2006-05-27 . chapter 3
Aw! Poor Leo! I'm also worried for April. O_O I hope Saki gets his in the end. Evil bastard. >:o
BubblyShell22
2006-04-18 . chapter 3
Great story so far. I can't wait to see the Turtles get their revenge on that jerk! He needs to pay for what he's done to my favorite Turtle. Update soon. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Pi90katana
2006-04-16 . chapter 3
When did you update? How could I have missed this?

Well, it was excellent as always! I absolutely loved it! So much angst... yet so much brotherly love.

Great job! Please update soon!
spootycup
2006-04-15 . chapter 3
oh man I need more... poor leo... man raph was asking for it... man poor leo.. more please..
The Ghost of FF. Net
2006-04-15 . chapter 3
Wow! This chapter was awesome! You did a great job and I loved the fight scene. You captured them all perfectly, especially Leo and Raph. Great job, and yes, you do deserve the reviews! Can't wait for the next update!
pacphys
2006-04-15 . chapter 3
well... Raph and Leo are arguing again. *sighs* I suppose that's uh, good? O_o

And then the battle O_O! Well done, wonderful little fight sequence, and quite the twist you slipped there on the end. Wonderful!

The end With Leo and Raph making up and promising to get through it all together is terrific. Great work.

Cheers,
~pacphys~
pacphys
2006-04-15 . chapter 2
O_O Suicide mission. Good cause, definitely, but suicide mission! Good Luck guys!

That scene with Leo's dream and the subsequent waking up and his reactions were wonderful. You're an amazing writer! Excellent, excellent work with this one.

Cheers,
~pacphys~
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