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Reviews for: Private Bet #6: Pen Pen's Pebble
Ranmaleopard 10/16/11 . chapter 2
interesting please continue!
brindani 2/24/07 . chapter 2
Bad! bad bad bad bad! You've left us hanging on the cusp of hilarity rarely seen anywhere. This is a tenchi version of 'Problem Solving' including the final scream of torture when there is no more to be found.

Ok, I'm over the tantrum. The story was very good. It has a lot of evident potential which I hope to one day see. Unfortunately it appears I'll have to live with my frustration as this is another 6 year old story with no sign of update. Well, I guess I can dream.

Looking good,

brindani
dogbertcarroll 10/11/06 . chapter 2
Damn it! We can see it heading for the fan and you haven't continued it yet!
AnimeBunny 8/10/02 . chapter 2
*laughs* yes i got very bored and im reviewing a story that last updated 4-25-01!Oh well...why havent you updated, is that the end of the story!Il ike Sasami and Tenchi together if that was going to be the couple. nice story even though its old and you'll probally never see my review.
The Mad shoe 1/18/02 . chapter 2
Please update for crying out loud!
Highly Flammable Man 4/26/01 . chapter 2
This is really good, beautifully written, can't wait for more...because well its too damn good to wait for...::yawns, just woken from nap:: keep writing! ::yawns::
lost 4/26/01 . chapter 2
he has opinions about everyone but Aeka. Don't make them negative or I'll hunt you down. Just kidding!Great fic.
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