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dragongirl91
2008-10-08 . chapter 16
Cool! An update! *does happy chant* Please keep going. I'm glad you picked up on this. :D

~dragongirl91
666BloodyHell666
2008-10-04 . chapter 16
whats gonna happen next?!
I can't wait for Shiei(shes my favorite character) to wake up...poor Yusuke, He's so dead.

anyway great chapter!
PLEASE update soon!!
dragongirl91
2008-05-30 . chapter 15
Awesome update! Thank you for the new chapter! :D

~dragongirl91

P.S- Still fighting that block..
002fox
2007-12-06 . chapter 14
Very good! Can't wait to see more of this! Update soon!
Kurokari Mikazuki
2007-10-07 . chapter 14
Woah, look who's sending in a review!
XD

Anyway, great chapter. I like it, stupid cliffhanger...
A few typos I noticed...
"A girl with aquamarine cried gems," I think there is a word missing in there... like hair maybe?

Ok, it was only one typo...
dragongirl91
2007-07-31 . chapter 14
AHH! Finally updated and killed us with a cliffhanger! Please update soon! Oh and nice installment! Keep up the great work! :D
Kurokari Mikazuki
2007-06-24 . chapter 13
I wonder how it took me so long to send in a review for this...hmm...

Anyway, nice;y written. I like it. i see there was reasoning to having Hiei receive that lock pick. Shackles that hurt ice demons... creative, very creative.

Update soon.
Kurokari Mikazuki
2007-03-16 . chapter 12
Nice update. Interesting Chapter... Kaisentei is causing trouble and being annoying as usual... lol.
Oh I will try to read and review the LOZ fic in the near future.
Star
2006-11-10 . chapter 9
I just noticed dragongirl91 updated here. Hey i know her!! This is really good though! Love it! Update soon!
dragongirl91
2006-10-31 . chapter 11
Awesome you updated! Great job! Well i'll be looking forward to more. Oh and case you didn't know the fighting scene is already up on DA.
dragongirl91
2006-10-21 . chapter 9
PLease update soon! ^-^
Star
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Awesome job. Keep going i read all the chapters. But i'm confused parts of it are cut off and you kinda jumped to the sequel...
Kurokari Mikazuki
2006-08-27 . chapter 9
we, nice gifts, Shiei's gift from Hiei was...hnn... I don't know... oh and I think it is nice that Hiei got the tear gem back.
Kurokari Mikazuki
2006-08-27 . chapter 8
hahahah, nice, Well great job on this chapter.
Kurokari Mikazuki
2006-07-31 . chapter 7
Nice one. I didn't catch any typos in this chapter.
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