 dragongirl91 2008-10-08 . chapter 16 Cool! An update! *does happy chant* Please keep going. I'm glad you picked up on this. :D
~dragongirl91 |
 666BloodyHell666 2008-10-04 . chapter 16whats gonna happen next?!
I can't wait for Shiei(shes my favorite character) to wake up...poor Yusuke, He's so dead.
anyway great chapter!
PLEASE update soon!! |
 dragongirl91 2008-05-30 . chapter 15 Awesome update! Thank you for the new chapter! :D
~dragongirl91
P.S- Still fighting that block.. |
 002fox 2007-12-06 . chapter 14Very good! Can't wait to see more of this! Update soon! |
 Kurokari Mikazuki 2007-10-07 . chapter 14Woah, look who's sending in a review!
XD
Anyway, great chapter. I like it, stupid cliffhanger...
A few typos I noticed...
"A girl with aquamarine cried gems," I think there is a word missing in there... like hair maybe?
Ok, it was only one typo... |
 dragongirl91 2007-07-31 . chapter 14 AHH! Finally updated and killed us with a cliffhanger! Please update soon! Oh and nice installment! Keep up the great work! :D |
 Kurokari Mikazuki 2007-06-24 . chapter 13I wonder how it took me so long to send in a review for this...hmm...
Anyway, nice;y written. I like it. i see there was reasoning to having Hiei receive that lock pick. Shackles that hurt ice demons... creative, very creative.
Update soon. |
 Kurokari Mikazuki 2007-03-16 . chapter 12Nice update. Interesting Chapter... Kaisentei is causing trouble and being annoying as usual... lol.
Oh I will try to read and review the LOZ fic in the near future. |
 Star 2006-11-10 . chapter 9 I just noticed dragongirl91 updated here. Hey i know her!! This is really good though! Love it! Update soon! |
 dragongirl91 2006-10-31 . chapter 11 Awesome you updated! Great job! Well i'll be looking forward to more. Oh and case you didn't know the fighting scene is already up on DA. |
 dragongirl91 2006-10-21 . chapter 9 PLease update soon! ^-^ |
 Star 2006-09-09 . chapter 1 Awesome job. Keep going i read all the chapters. But i'm confused parts of it are cut off and you kinda jumped to the sequel... |
 Kurokari Mikazuki 2006-08-27 . chapter 9we, nice gifts, Shiei's gift from Hiei was...hnn... I don't know... oh and I think it is nice that Hiei got the tear gem back. |
 Kurokari Mikazuki 2006-08-27 . chapter 8hahahah, nice, Well great job on this chapter. |
 Kurokari Mikazuki 2006-07-31 . chapter 7Nice one. I didn't catch any typos in this chapter. |