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Michael2
2006-12-27
ch 1,
abuseInteresting story. It is very illustrative of his feelings and also very plausible.
Invisible Shadowess
2006-11-20
ch 1,
abuseok... i know it's been like a year since you last did this but if you don't mind, please continue. this was so short and kinda teasing; you can't leave it like this.

-Anie
Amma
2006-10-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI thought the story was very good and it true one change in a memory can change the outcome of someones life keep going
TheCritic18
2006-06-21
ch 1,
abuseC'mon youve got to continue this story ok. Its sounds like a good plot
Quillar
2006-03-04
ch 1,
abuseIt needs to be updated! I really can't tell wether I like it or not if you don't update so please do.
Charmed Ravenclaw
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI reckon you should have written a longer chapter on this. Pretty good so dar - if you're planning to update.
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