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| Michael2 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story. It is very illustrative of his feelings and also very plausible. |
| Invisible Shadowess 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseok... i know it's been like a year since you last did this but if you don't mind, please continue. this was so short and kinda teasing; you can't leave it like this. -Anie |
| Amma 2006-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought the story was very good and it true one change in a memory can change the outcome of someones life keep going |
| TheCritic18 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseC'mon youve got to continue this story ok. Its sounds like a good plot |
| Quillar 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseIt needs to be updated! I really can't tell wether I like it or not if you don't update so please do. |
| Charmed Ravenclaw 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI reckon you should have written a longer chapter on this. Pretty good so dar - if you're planning to update. |