Interesting story. It is very illustrative of his feelings and also very plausible.

ok... i know it's been like a year since you last did this but if you don't mind, please continue. this was so short and kinda teasing; you can't leave it like this.

-Anie

I thought the story was very good and it true one change in a memory can change the outcome of someones life keep going

C'mon youve got to continue this story ok. Its sounds like a good plot

It needs to be updated! I really can't tell wether I like it or not if you don't update so please do.

I reckon you should have written a longer chapter on this. Pretty good so dar - if you're planning to update.