wow that was so beautiful... amazing!

wow, that was really good. it was very elegantly written and you showed such character depth, it was really just astounding. AWESOME JOB!

~Jess

I don't know if I've commente before, but I love this story. Even though it's kinda of a sad-ish story, it was well written and, in a way, touches my heart. :)

aw... what a wonderful story... like it! i like Yuki's POV than others...!

keep it up!! ^ ^p

I think u are a genius. I prasie the land u walk on!

Not heard the song before but the fic was definitely something

Wow! That was so sweet! What you wrote sounds like something Shuichi would do: take care of Yuki even though he could barely keep his eyes open. That was so cute! Love it! Fantastic! Bravo, bravo.

Aww, I loved this fic!

that was incredible - i love the way you captured the characters so well. brilliant piece.

aww this is such a good story

This is definitely a heartrendering fic. Although at the beginning I had the impulse to bash Yuki for cheating on Shuichi, I guess Shuichi finally managed to make Yuki see the light in their relationship. I know it's slightly out of character for Yuki to show emotions,especially towards Shuichi, but I can't help to love the last statement he made. Guess I'm a sap freak after all... ^^

Anyway, beautiful fic. ^^

~ Kaede Yuki @ Yukiya ~

although Yuki's a bastard here, i can't help but admire him. well, write more gravi fics. Shuichi deserves to be loved by Eiri!

That was very good. I truly loved it. I believe it shows their relationship well.

Continue writing. ^-^

that was so sweet! you should think about making another chapter to this (if thats possible)

aw
how cute (sighs)