   Lunaria Hyperion 2/5/06 . chapter 4This is really really cute. It needs more chapters *shameless hint* but I liked it very much. Especially little Xellos and Lina, how cute! |
| Za Metallium 9/28/01 . chapter 4 Kawaii! This is funny and cute and just plain fun. Write more! |
| laura 9/16/01 . chapter 4 please write more that was really good |
| Sarryn 9/10/01 . chapter 4 This is really good! Please continue as soon as you can! |
| UTSR 7/26/01 . chapter 4 OOOOO! how cute! write more please! |
| Xelena 6/14/01 . chapter 4 More. Write more please. |
| monmon 6/13/01 . chapter 4 Awww...the start of a beautiful friendship...this is way cute...continue please! ) |
| Sailor Starly 6/13/01 . chapter 4 THAT IS SOOOOOO CUUUUUUTE! Keep it going i really like it! |
| MairiNathaira 6/13/01 . chapter 4 Bahahaha! Who'd ever suspected that Sylphiel is the bad wolf! _ Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Xelena 5/17/01 . chapter 3 It's good- that said, you need to write more- UPDATE, and SOON. |
| marz 4/29/01 . chapter 3 I thought it was so cute! hehe! When are you coming out with more? Are you going to introduce ther other character too? oh yeah can you email me when you do update your story, I love it! |
| The Confuser 4/28/01 . chapter 3 (not signed in) I really liked that, it's funny to hear about Lina, Xellos and Zelgadis growing up together. _ Keep it up! |
| monmon 4/27/01 . chapter 3 This so cute! MORE PLEASE! |
| EmeraldIce 4/27/01 . chapter 3 Good work! even though i havent seen the show, i love your fanfic.. keep writting.. and dont forget to finish coils of a serpent.. |
| Reanna R. King 4/27/01 . chapter 3 These are so great! I love the concept of the Slayers gang as little kids. Little Xel-sama is just so adorable! Please write more soon! :D |
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