what happened to the sequal? i read some of it a few months ago but now its vanished

lmao!
"YOU'RE WHAT!"
classic.
i can see his face now..
:pp
nice story.

This was good I really enjoyed it.

hahaha...
Don't you already have 20 whistles? No 19. lol

what did that chick want? tell me? does she want the water lands? is she her lost unknown sister? tell me...thats what i think. and haru and the maid whose name a cant spell should totally hook up?

love this

I admit that I have guiltily read this far into the story, because the plot is so good, but I truly don't find this story worthy of the rating (it's one chapter, a simple warning to those faint of heart would suffice). And the actual scene was very uncomfortable to me while reading it. It was a rather fast lead up to their relationship, and the grammer in some places (which i fought to overlook) was absolutely atrocious.
Don't apologize for it, little mistakes now and then are acceptable, but please get a beta.
Like I said the plot is very good, and with better writing skills I sincerely hope that you take another crack at it.
It may seem harsh what I'm saying, but trust me it's better to get an honest opinion versus those of a million people saying 'We love it. Another chapter. Update soon.'
It's not going to help you in the long run.

hahahahaha omg!!

love the story, she's pregnent with the avatar right, by the way zuko's sister's name is Azula

This seems interesting

cant wait to read the sequel!! ^_^ i loved this story very much

grr looks like i have to stop here. cant wait to start again tomorrow morning!

you have a very original idea here, i love it! ^_^

from this first chapter, im pretty sure im going to enjoy reading this :)

oh gasp whoever could it be? And she's...pregnant, yeah not hard to figure out