Very good

Hey I like your story! I am going to see if there is a sequel and if there is you will be hearing from me!! Bye:D
-Animelover60

Arisa just happens to be my Japanese name.

I really love the ending of this chapter!
It is really funny how they all run by!
I love the pairing Gippel Rikku! Yay!
I really like Astrah too!
The way that you portrayed Paine and Yuna was awesome as well, it was almost like they where a bit OCC, but it was really awesome!
Great story!
-Manga-Fanatic

aw! I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY! -sniffle-WAAH! u write so freakin well! GREAT JOB ^0^

You should go through and spellcheck some chapters; there are some glaring errors that need a tending to. Otherwise, nice story overall. Though I do have to admit, everybody getting hitched was a bit of a turn-off. Weddings right, left, and center! Plus, the "mature" chapter was a bit disappointing. I mean, there would be more to that with all the sexual tension previously existing between them. Maybe that's just me. Maybe it's just your conservative-ish standpoint. Anyway, cheers.

rikku always asks if the ppl need something when they come to her.

lol. just a little something i noticed.


this story is very intriguing.!

you are a scary person. i feel bad for the person you're going to marry...

I liked this fanfic. Rikku and Gippel are a favorite pairing of mine. It seems from your profile that you like most of the same couples I do. Even to the people I hate. (*Whispers* I think Kikyo needs to die and stay dead as well!) Anyway, you did a great job with this story, even if everyone seemed to get married and there wasn't really even any single people. Still it was a good read. I can't wait to see what you did with Katara and Zuko!

nice fic

This storyy is so cool i just spant my whole afternoon reading it...

Great story, but your Al Bhed is incorrect. Rimm is Hull in English. I equals U in English.

I loved this story and I'm glad I took the time to read this(it did take me some time) I really admire your dedication to this piece, I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!

To pair her up with Brother? If it is then thank God! I feel so sorry for Brother.

nausea, not nausia.