ok, ew. The fic itself is good, I'm not ewing that. Just the part about the kid's father being her (adopted) father.

Wonderfully twisted. Makes me want to beg you for an expansion, but I shall control myself...barely. :)

aw, you made delia (the evil murderess (did i spell that right), friend of crazed murdering princesses and roger's former mistress (MISTRESS?!? 'scuse me while i gag) sound actually, well...nice. normal. not all the things i said she was. the best word i can come up with is sweet. now i never thought Delia the Evil could sound...sweet. good job. REALLY good job.

as much as i liked it, i'm confusd. but i'll keep reading.

Just found this after chapter 4 - alanna's was confusing - why wouldn't the love be for real?
Mindelin's was...weird. Not so sure I like that one. Purely on the basis that I don't see Ilane getting pregnant before marriage (pregnancy charms, anyone??)
Don't like the fact in LK that Buri gives up her command - can't see her being happy as a kept woman either.
Like the picture of Delia as an innocent.

do daine! do thayet! do do oh well i can't think of any more. so please do daine and thayet. and kally maybe. and aly. and miri. and and i'll stop now

Ouch. Poor Buri. Lesson #1 for female warriors: don't marry up. If you don't outrank your husband, you haven't a hope of not being assimilated into tradition wifehood.

so i guess she's not marrying raoul? what's up with that?!?!?!

Heh. It's always those solidly respectable middle-class (in origin, if no longer in fact) families that have most twisted skeletons, isn't it?

um...k? confusing much? so u'r saying illane had patrice while she was getting married, and it wasn't piers' baby? but patrice's is now piers?? WHAT? i kinda think not...

uh, i don't get it. she doesn't love george? either way, quite poetic...

COMMA SPLICING !*(@*%##%(*%($!?!!

And I still like this one. (Otherwise.)

Alanna always thinks that anything good that happens to her is somewhat wrong. (It's a failing - a super annoying failing. Gar.)*

-Sally

*interpretation: I like what you do with characters that need it.

i'm confused.

1. who's she marrying, and why doesn't she love him?
2. who the frink is lan? do you mean liam?

this is an alanna/george wedding...right? does it seem so negative because she's not femine or because she's marrying jon? i'm kinda confused, but none-the-less, i really did like it and can't wait for the other weddings!