That was so FREAKY, chapter 70's ending. It's really creepy to think that in the anime Pride kills his adopted son, but in the manga King Bradly is Wrath and Selim is Pride, so it would be like...ehh...I can't...urgh it's too confuzzling. So WEIRD! So I guess this whole story is following the anime, right? NOW you tell us.

This is an amazing story! Please hurry and update!

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How is it that Pride ages but the other's don't?? UPDATE SOON or I'll help Envy torture you!! *evil laugh/ chuckle* :D :D

How did Wrath end up looking human?? Because he didn't get red stones for about 5 years after he was created?? :D :D

Nice

OK, just two things wrong here:
1:Greed was imprisoned while the previous Lust was around
2:Greed was imprisoned when Pride was a newborn

This is SUCH a great story!! I'm a huge fan, I really can't wait for the next update ^_^ You're a terrific writer, keep up the good work!

This is gold. You must continue. I am loving myself.

Awesome story, I hope to read more of it later! ^^

Great! I loved it! I'm a Greed fan. He is my favorite homunculi.

Wow, were really coming into the close now... can't wait ^^ . Oh, so then... Lust is next right... I don't know if you remember, but in the anime, when Lust meets Greed for the first time she says "I presume you've met Gluttony. And me, well I'm the Lust" ... So, does this mean that others attempted to create a Lust and failed ... I don't know... good story so far... poor Greed...

I'm sorry if I'm boring you with these reviews...but your story so far is awesome! OMG i LOVE the poem you made about Greed...god did i cry in that episode...must save forever!! XD Keep it going!

Great story man, keep up the good work.

Mr. Scarface

Hey cool story! I've only read the first chapter, but its awesome cause its got Greed!! XD. Another Greed fan! Yea! Yes, i cried so hard when he died in the anime, and then in the manga...OMG I BALLED MY EYES OUT! Good story again!