Man, that was great! There was so much lusting going on i just about fell of my chair.. bjesus... It was wonderful fun going through that thinking of Kelly too, it kinda put the icing on the cake for me. And need i say it was excellently written? Well, it was.

Thanks for a great read!

Well, I don't go for Pam and Bill together but I still liked this. It was good.

*snerk!* All hail, Stanford! [chanting] Stanford! Stanford! Stanford!

One small step for ficcers, one giant leap for 'ship-kind!

This was a great story - very well rationalized and thought out. You put a lot of work into making it plausible and it payed off. I could just relax and enjoy the byplay. And, er, foreplay.

Whew! I have to say, Chapter 6 may have been my favorite. Great use of tension and strong dialogue.

Excellente! More! More!

wow,can i tell you i loved how you interwove kelly robinson into bills disguise.

loved that he went on the march and stood up when he needed too.i also enjoyed pams work on the case.

i can see bill's face when pam blew him the kiss.lol

its hard for me to picture bill and pam cause i am so accustomed to pam/ralph .but youve done it,i ma slowly getting there and can see it happening.

cant wait for the next chapters and to think i will have 2 versions to read...

thanks louise

Yet another SUPERB fanfic from this author! I really feel as if I am watching an episode on TV! The plot and locations shows great creative imagination. She really has the dialogue down perfect too. I hope this story last for many more chapters. Don't think of me as being too greedy when I say I hope this one lasts into the double digits!