   Lone Wolfs Darkness 7/8/05 . chapter 5James? as in James Mcloud? |
| Gijinka Renamon 5/16/04 . chapter 8 Cool! I just loved that plot twist with Fox's dad! |
| Taft 1/7/03 . chapter 8 Exelent! |
| Wolfgangh 12/14/01 . chapter 8 no offence intended (it always sound like I'm being a bastard when I try constructive critisism)
But it was a little boaring and the ending left a bit to be desierd. Sorry but I'm getting sick of every story ending up with an everything works oust and they all live happily ever after ending its been done befor and it is in almost every story you will ever read |
| Jake 6/10/01 . chapter 8 That was the sweetest story I have ever read! Write another! |
| Radar's Shadow 6/10/01 . chapter 8 wow...(mouth hung open) |
| Neil 6/5/01 . chapter 8 Dude, Great Story! |
| nonecares 6/3/01 . chapter 7 finish it! please! |
| anonymous 6/3/01 . chapter 1 great! Interesting story! Keep writing! |
| anonomus 6/1/01 . chapter 6 Very enjoyable, make more chapters! |
| ike 5/15/01 . chapter 6 write more! |
| Gerudo-sama 5/6/01 . chapter 2 Okay, your's is the first fic I ever reveiwed truthfully, so here it goes:
It's a great consept, I have no doubt about that. However, the way the consept was presented wasn't that good. In all truth it was flat out boring. Puncuation mistakes also take away from the overall fic. A little more detail and grammar cheak would really help. My advice is: Keep writing so you get better, you have great potential! |
| Simbrie Nytesky 4/27/01 . chapter 1 Anguirus? Are you the same Anguirus from INSA, and former INSU? |
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