Another great story! The last bit made me laugh a lot, but the rest wasn't really laughing material. It was very thought-provoking. Thanks again for a great read.
Ellie
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I really liked this story. The last line made me laugh.

Deliciously nasty!

Hello again! I like it good idea, lotsa money! *evil laugh* luv Iona

Wow...I liked it. o.0

Good job!

It's somewhat.. plain, don't you think? Kind of hollow somehow, I dunno, you've done better, no ofense you're really good I like most things you write, but this is from my point of view, definitely not your best, no ofense meant, perhaps I should review if i didn't like it next time??

interesting. v. good