 My Solitude 4/6/12 . chapter 1This is quite an interesting chapter. XD |
 Arlewena 1/8/12 . chapter 1I understand that this hasn't been updated in years, but if you have not lost the plotline or anything, you should really finish it. I looks like it will be a really interesting story. I understand if you don't want to continue it though. |
 WezL 12/3/11 . chapter 1I Love this story and the plot! Even if there is only one chapter, it was a great read and was written very well. Great work! |
 Lil'Dee 9/2/10 . chapter 1I absolutely love this story XD
please continue it :) |
 Windflight 7/17/10 . chapter 1It sounds really cool so far. I'm really interested as to their meeting. Please update! |
 HerGoldenWings 7/5/10 . chapter 1It's abandoned isn't it? :(
Shame, I adore it. |
 Utterly Ostentatious 4/2/10 . chapter 1i love this! now all i need is the next chapter... wink wink :D |
 Akira Shinaichi 9/13/09 . chapter 1I like how you've set up this AU and I'm a Tamora Pierce fan as well :). I know it's just the first chapter, but I think you can be a little 'looser' with your interpretations of the characters. Sometimes, maybe unintentionally, you've used almost word-by-word descriptions of characters from the books, movies, or other fics and that's just a pet peeve of mine, nothing too big of a deal. On the other hand, I like Harry's perceptiveness in being aware of how he, Remus, and his country are viewed by others and already preparing to deal with it in his own way.
I'll wait for the next chapter before making any big judgments though, keep it up!
-.- |
 R.L.R 8/16/09 . chapter 1One bloody chapter, and you have *225* reviews? Well, 226 now, but *damn!*
Anyway, it's a bloody good start and you should update. Which you're probably not going to anyway. *sighs* Oh well. A girl can dream.
But just in case you do...I'll be watching. And waiting. I sound like a fucking stalker. Sorry. For the language *and* the creepiness. Just remember to update sometime soon! |
 Fire Wolf Spirit 8/12/09 . chapter 1This is absolutely amazing! I sincerly hope you continue! X3 |
 cat-in-a-bag 8/11/09 . chapter 1You haven't updated this fic in a while, it seems, but I really hope you do continue it :). It's so awesome, and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 rockhorsegeek 6/7/09 . chapter 1Wow, great chapter! I love the AU ideas, and the Harry Potter you've portrayed is a pretty damn good one. Nice work! |
 thrnbrooke 4/14/09 . chapter 1Oh please continue! What happens next? |
 Azhi21 2/2/09 . chapter 1! |
 Betsuni Sasoko 1/30/09 . chapter 1 I noticed that the repost at the bottom says
"CHAPTER ONE REPOSTED 7/5/07." That was two yaers ago. Are you still here? Not to be mean but thats a long time to me.
Will you PLEASE wright another chapter soon? |