waw! this was really beautiful, I loved it!

Absolutely beautiful! Wonderful job.

Kat

You really are a wonderful writer…very catching

It's a beauty, Cam. As usual. :)

-Penn

Well, I reckon you're wonderful. But you know that :) Outwrite you? You dare me? well, well... I could always stretch "The End is the Beginning..." to more than 42 000 words, I reckon, but you'd have to wait longer for it. Are you sure you wanna dare me?

cute,very cute

Nice. Very sweet. A bit less on the description maybe. The dialogue was nice at the end.

Awww...that was so sweet and sad at the same time. very poetic.

Beautifully written with both sadness and rediscovered joy. My heart went out to Janeway as she whispered "All things die." But then, their love is not encompased by 'all things' so it lives on... Write on Sandman.