I must say, so far this is quite interesting. Not saying that I'm a total fan of Yaoi, (yeah right) But you get the picture. Hehe must do some more. Really, really liked

LOVELY! I LOVE IT!

And decidingly more realistic than before XD

Love,
Kuro

I think your twelve year old writing skills were good for a twelve year old. I couldn't help from giggling knowing it was a twelve year old you who had wrote this. hehe ;]
If I were to post my 12 year old stories all hell would break loose.

M Pocky. I love that! But i've only tried the chocolate ones, those are yummy!! :) Anyway, great story, odd but really kool. :D

You're familliar with Egyptian mythology?!?!?! Jebus, I was beginning to think I was the only one... I've been studying it since I was, like, four.

Cute, I liked it. The ending was a little corny, but oh well.

--Major Riza McKirdy, Lupine Alchemist

omg omg omg I love it!
ps
what does Ai Shiteru mean?

lol i love this! now i am one of your new fans lol.

Damn! You're good at this! Did you like, think this up all by yourself? If u did then you are way friggin cool. This is a hot storythat manages to not be too overly kinky! Well done. I like the (*ahem*) descriptive words. lol.
XD

I LOVE tendershipping

I LOVE strawberry pocky

I LOVE graphic yaoi lemon

So yeah,this storys an all rounder for me

Who's Sarah? Is it you? Can I have a copy of that video recording? (little devil horns coming out of head) Hee hee.

nice lemon

Hey, I thought it was awesome. Cute part at the end, and props for having Ryou and Bakura in your house! Lol, later!

o.o *blinks* Well...

Sakina x

um i know this is embarassing but what exactly is a pocky? *blushes* anyway i loved this story *drools* it was really hot! ^_^! you write awesome!

hehehe i would have stolen this master pice from you and read it over and over again hehehehehehehe