PLEASE.WRITE.MORE.A.S.A.P.!PLEASE!

LOVE IT! I so wish you'd write more, it was a great story.

aaww you have to finish this, so they can live happily ever after and have lots of mini human/elf babies with artemises brain n holly's kick-** ness (and her ears too)

Oh, I hope she stays! This is my favorite pairing! It's a really good and well written fic, too!

ah, Kitty, it is good to have you back... we have missed you muchly... This is lovely, as always. And Eye on Fowl is back from the dead! woohoo!

Firstly, I'd expect YOU to know better than to say "hazel eyes locking onto blue." FANGIRLS use that phrase, bloody hell. Secondly, this fic makes me squirmish, which means it's too mushy, and in a regular boy-girl-mushy-sap-for-two-weeks-dump-'em-and-move-on kind of way. Thirdly, I think Artemis and Holly should be enough in character that you could recognize them without the names attached, which you did not accomplish, in my opinion. They could be any two characters from any teen drama. Artemis isn't formal enough, his vocabulary isn't stiff enough, Holly's not fiery enough, and she sighs too much.

Thank you and goodnight!