 BettyHall223 2007-06-11 . chapter 8Good story. Loved the letters between Jack and Sam. |
 Aruna Hart 2007-06-10 . chapter 8wow!great job! |
 7 League Boots 2007-06-08 . chapter 8Awesome. Sam and Jack connected - precious. Very angsty with his "kitty" stalking him - rather gruesome image! The story captured the many layers of their bond - friendship, duty, compassion, affection in good characterization; also loved the dialogue and the dream/letter/thought sequences were good visuals. I didn't find anything "sappy" about them; the shippiness was kind of understated and it worked well here. Good work, thanks for this stirring Sam and Jack story. |
 ALIMOO1971 2007-06-08 . chapter 8great chapter and story, i'll be looking ford to reading more :-) keep up the good work |
 PatriciaS 2007-06-08 . chapter 8Good story thanks for sharing. |
 Ilovesg1 2007-06-08 . chapter 8Very nice ending. I am glad that the link has continued, very useful in their line of work. |
 VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-06-08 . chapter 8great fic, but I hope the sequel ends with RST and not UST, with which this fic ended, which, frankly, disappointed me.
just one thing, you can even use it in the sequel: Jack and Sam are 2 healthy mature, adult people, who are in love and share a mind link. I sincerely doubt that neither of them would ever have an erotic dream, much less not even once in the course of weeks or months. These dreams are completely normal and quite common in people who are going through years of abstinence and strong sexual tension and thus frustration, which J&S are undoubtebly going through. And the probability that they would always dream of being on Jack's roof together, when they share a dream, and never dream of sex is very small. You might use this kind of dream in the sequel as a kind of a push or a plot device. |
 ALIMOO1971 2007-05-27 . chapter 7great chapter, please up date soon |
 VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-05-27 . chapter 7loved it, especially because you knocked down those stupid legends about Jack not doing paperwork (he was the base's 2IC which means he did most of the paperwork when it came to running the base) and the dumb act (everyone with a little brain knows he's not stupid, you don't make a 2 Star without some really high education and intelligence).
update soon! |
 Ilovesg1 2007-05-27 . chapter 7Thanks for updating. Good chapter. Oy, could you see the NID wanting to disect them. |
 Natters 2006-06-19 . chapter 6poor jack. more please |
 Natters 2006-06-19 . chapter 5good chapter |
 Ilovesg1 2006-06-16 . chapter 6Aw...he can't die now. Janet is waiting to heal him. |
 Ilovesg1 2006-06-16 . chapter 4If that's Jack's definition of a "few scratches", a visit with MacKenzie might be in order when he gets home. |
 Ilovesg1 2006-06-16 . chapter 3NID...why does anyone in the Government put up with these thugs?
Hm, so a mental connection, through their dreams. Destiny. |