This was so sad and yet beautiful I loved it! You both did an amazing job.

Kat

Wow powerful stuff.

I swear to god, the first part got me crying and that means something…good work

I'm genuinely speechless. Nothing I say is going to do this story justice. I almost had to come strangle you for plummeting me back into an abyss of depression, until you ended it they way you did. So good at touching, revealing the soul...the hurt soul, that it's clear you know what you are talking about.

Wow, that was some of the best angst I've read here. Nice job!

? it was way too full of angst and i wanted to stop at the 2nd paragraph. Story was too long and over the top. I like to read fic that's a bit believable, and this wasn't. you lost me.

My God! This is great! It was so sad, but yet... naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! I love this!

That was really well written. I like how the story was given from the view of both Janeway and Chakotay. The story was really sad and touching. It was as if neither of them could catch a break. Janeway looses so much and Chakotay comes back with such hope and finds that he has lost what he cares about most off all as well. It's good that they are able to make it through.

Waaahhh...that was sad. good though.