So, so good. For real. I just did a search for certain story criteria and went back to the oldest ones... so glad I found this. It's one of the best DA's I've read. I love the idea, the internal MaxBen conv, her guilt. And how Logan felt during that ep. Wonderful job, it's made my faves list.

wow! I will definitely be checking out your other works. The only thing I did not quite get was if he was in her head or not. I assumed he was but I am not quite sure. If he is in her head I would suggest putting what he says in italics. It would make the story easier to follow.

Powerful and beautiful, and god, I love twisted Ben.

Incredibly powerful, this. YOu were amazingly insightful, intelligent. Dark as this was, I loved it.

My goodness that was dark. Excellent writing.

What can I say, except wow-this one is amazing, which is saying a lot given your other fics. You have an incredible talent.

I've read several other stories of yours. Wow. Each of them is good, but this is sheer brilliance. Let me repeat; wow.

I liked this a lot. Since Max killed Ben it was dropped. As far as the show goes I don't even think that Zack knows about it . . . in any case I really like what you did with the situation. Ben's anger is great and more then justified given the harsh end he was brought to.

Very good, I really liked this. You captured inner torment and made it perfect.

I liked this story! I think you conveyed Max's emotions very well; and Ben's too.

Geez, that was powerful, if not a little demented. Is he like, in her head, now? Good story, please continue!