OMG this is really good but its also brilliant!

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WTF? thst made no sense! how gay

wow whhee...that was sad. something i can relate too.

Aw, that's sad... Poor girl.

Slán slán!

Ashla

WTF? i dont get it

It was very short but to the point. You have a good command of words to describe the onesidedness of the relationship. Keep it up.

And I want to ask something. In the original/Japanese version, does Takao really call Hiromi either Romi or Romi-chan? Please let me know, thanks!

Hey,

Oh sad, my heart feels as if somebody is holding it in a death grip, and my breathing is somewhat short and harsh...(let's just hope it's not a heart attack) I feel so, well i'm not exactly sure. I feel so sad, kinda angry, but mostly depressed. You're very poetic and i meant to tell you that after I read your story 'A shoulder to cry on' (or something to that effect.) Sometimes I have to re-read some parts cause my little brain can't take it all in at once. Well another good one, can't wait for more great stories.

-Kami

*sniff sniff*

aw poor hiromi...

Personally I think it's fine as it is. Poor Hiromi :-( One-sided indeed and the words and expressions were on target and used effectively. I enojyed it. I thought it was great.

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So totally depressing... Something to match my mood... Love it, great job!