I love how you write action. But aren't there a few lose ends left?

hi i love this story but about the summoning its seems that you can only have one main summoning
the others are from small summoning cant you make in the sequel that sakura can have more
main summoning so she can also the main slug summoning and not just the small one
that tsunade said

Love HellAngel

Eugh. Sakura makes just the shittiest shinobi ever. Other fics with her as a focus have her make up her appalling weaknesses with an inspired variety of traits from technical prowess to charisma to sheer deviousness.
This one's really accurate in portraying her as having absolutely no remarkable characteristics whatsover, emotionally or physically - not even having any way to properly apply what talent she does have. It's getting a little tiring watching her struggle to keep up even at such a ridiculously low level, when one usually reads material where the character finds their niche and excels in it.
I'm of the opinion that maybe the world needs its share of 'the main character sucks and seems incapable of improving in any meaningful way' stories though.

Okay-I-guess? I was expecting a more neat wrap-up of the plot threads - that all of it was going to some particular destination.

I thought there were supposed to be five promoted Chunnin from Konoha? But, LeeSak-NejiTenten ?Not five but four.

It was great to read nonetheless

The-one-who-is-plotting

K-H

Excellent story overall! At first when I started reading it, I was worried the parts of Naruto's journey would be boring repetition from canon, but turns out they were very interesting (though I was more interested in Sakura's side of the story).
I especially liked how you incorporated all the filler material from canon, the characters from the other villages etc. and connected them all somehow (as in they were't just random evil ninjas like in the fillers, but rather had credible ties in with more well-known characters and storylines). While I like the Akatsuki and Oro-chan, even they can get a bit boring after a while.

-K.L

I liked the story for the most part, but I feel you focused on too many characters. It would have been better to switch between characters on a chapter base, or even better have a companion fic that focused on another character.

This, oddly enough, isn't the first fic with a traitor parent (although it was the father, and he was in root) for Sakura that I've read. A lot of what is in here is contradicted by canon, but meh. Obviously that canon wasn't out when this story was written 5 years ago.

I like your version of Samehade more than the canon version.

Aww, Ichi :(

just wanted to say.. ur title and synopsis is contracting each other!

I know this story is from like four years ago, but I just read it and had to tell you how fantastic I thought it was. It was really long. It was really really long. It was worth it though. I thought it was so interesting. The plot was just so good. I thought everyone was really in character as well. I liked how Sakura was one of the heroes instead of just in the background as she often is. All in all, I loved it.

In all honesty, I feel that nothing I can say would be adequate to explain what I am thinking. This story took me HOURS to read, which is really unusual. I can generally finish a story of this length in no time at all, but I read this from the time I woke up until now, and it's nearly four o'clock in the morning. Basically, this story was so well put together: the characterization was fantastic and consistent, the progression was realistic, and the way you made the story entirely your own was phenomenal. I have never read a story that used this idea, so it was truly fascinating and well worth the time. All I can say is that it left me wanting to read more...So I think I'm going to. I'll be checking out some more of your stories. Thank you for the wonderful read. Truly one of the best stories I have read in years.

xoxo, Mean-chan

Do you know that 3 years is around 1000 days not 100 days..

Eitherway I didnt read much of it as I found your Naruto too weak and worse than canon..

Finally finished this Aaron. I'm going to have to tell you that this took ages, and I mean ages, to finish. I can't even remember the amount of hours I've spent awake reading every single chapter, and the length of them was absurd! My eyes feel partially dead but I have to thank you for putting the time and everything else you had into creating this. One of the best reads I've had in a long, long time and kept me entertained throughout. Might certainly mean I missed out on other opportunities to get ahead in school but I'll be fine, I'm sure haha. Great job regardless and I'm eternally thankful. It was an extremely satisfying experience and I'm very happy to have finally finished it haha xD Looking forward to more of your work and I'd just like to say one more time, amazing job and you should really give yourself a pat on the back. To think this was published so long ago and updated so long ago too... and yet still this good is insane. You took a largely undeveloped story and made it into your own, extremely well. There's just too much to say about this and it's 03:56 A.M. and I really need to sleep haha! I'll be back soon-yo! Night :)

This is definitely one of the best-if not the outright best-Naruto fanfic I've ever had the infinite pleasure of reading. It's also one of the best stories I've ever read in general. You took Kishimoto's story and practically made it your own from the point you started at. I've seen the characters shifting in their mentalities, rather than just seeing randomly act out of character.

The fight scenes have been superb and detailed, the story has been full of interesting little twists and cliffhangers, the pacing has been excellent, the bits of humor have been well-placed and never really felt as if they were forced...and overall, it's definitely been an addicting, riveting experience reading this. This was some excellent work, you deserve a round of applause.