*sniffles* at the end it was so beautiful...and it was funny how they left the sheriff there.

Very well done

So so good :-D

Jess x

Very good story.

And if you would accept a minor correction from a Dane. It's "mange tak", and not "mugna tak". It's just to help you out a bit. :-)

Charlie

just brilliant had me crying at the end when grissom confesses 1st time ever that happened.

so please write more.

I liked it, good job.