So sad, so sacrifical of Chakotay, not sure I like how kathryn treats him, just getting what she needs/wants! I liked it though! :-) x

It's amazing how slow emotional and relationship maturity is in coming compared to the physical one. It is a growth that takes conscious effort and stepping outside a comfort zone. I just hope she finds hers before it's too late.

Oh joj! (

it's good, but not your best

I loved it! Sad but true.

::really shivers:: whewwww...that was REALLY good. and terribly sad. but absolutely wonderful! writing was excellent. wow. wow. i think this story would make more sense with slightly different characters, but its still amazing!

Okay, I think I'll just find a phaser rifle and blow my own head off. Very well written, but very sad. Poor, sweet, tortured Chakotay. He deserves more, they both do. The saddest part it that it's believable of both characters. Excellent writing.

Sad...sad...