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Rogue Daffodil
2008-03-17
ch 14,
abuseAw, that was so sweet! I just loved it!
Dark King
2008-02-11
ch 14,
abusereally good story- though i think if albel opened up a little bit more during the story it would have made it a bit easier to see why she would feel safe and stay. i did like the plot though, keep up the good work
euphoria6a.
2007-01-04
ch 14,
abuseOMFG! i dunno what to say, just that this is possibly one of THEE best stories i have ever read!

how can you people write so many good alphia fics and i cant?!?!?!?!

this is definetely in my favorite stories list. i admire you. for having such great talents to write such a great story

alphia is life♥

idunno what else to say :x

keep it up!
Sylis
2006-06-12
ch 14,
abuseThat was a great story. There aren't enough good Sophia Albel stories!
Sylis
2006-06-10
ch 6,
abuseA good story so far. Can't wait to read more.
Monochromatic Pylon
2006-05-25
ch 14,
abuseI like how the story end.. it just like 'and they live happily ever after' xD
mangaka-love
2006-05-13
ch 14, anon.
abuseWah! That was truly a good story! Lol I love Alphia so much XD
Sashe
2006-05-01
ch 14,
abusegreat ending to a great story. Knda sad that it is over though! I particularly liked the bit bout Airyglyph's beauty - "it was like the beauty rested hidden for those who tried to find. But she had found it and had fallen instantly in love with it."

I felt as though that could easily be used to explain her feelings about Albel too. Anyway, enough blabbering it was great, write more stories :)
dizzified
2006-04-22
ch 14,
abuseJust finished reading; thanks for writing such a great fic! :) I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. XD
rice8369
2006-04-03
ch 14,
abusetwo thumbs up.. dragon.. great ending. i was smiling the whole time when i read the ending.. i love this story.. and it has the perfect little ending. i wonder how you will end untold story.. thanks for writing a perfect ending story!
ThrogmortenMimic
2006-04-03
ch 14,
abuseYAY!! I never knew bout this story till you said in the forums that you had finished it! But that means there was no waiting in between chapters... So, it was cool. I thought it was pretty good, too. Write another! Oh, and in one chapter, you mentioned the male competitiveness? Its simple. If one male wins, and the other loses, No loser can save the damsel in distress, its always the knight in shining armour. All men have a "Knight In Shining Armour" Complex, its what leads them to save women... Yet, in this day and age, it never works... :'( Thats supposed to be crying, lol
keeki
2006-04-02
ch 14,
abuseAw so sweet, what a fitting end to a lovely story. Just how I would picture a Sophia / Albel relationship. How he's hesitant to admit it, but feels it just the same. Aw and about the story being told by their child, so sweet.

And I like Disney endings too, everyone needs a happy ending every now and then :)
Fallacy
2006-04-02
ch 14,
abuseYay for the Disney and the many sexual innuendos affiliated with it! :D

Aw...such a cute ending! Ugh...I REALLY need to get OMAM and KtS done. They're driving me up the WALL!

Hehe...Pink Floyd reference.

Nevermind. -_-U

Anyway, I loved how you put that saying she was "trouble" was his way of saying "I love you". So very touching! And inspiring! Now, I am off to write, write, WRITE! XD
Shizuka Usagi
2006-04-01
ch 14,
abuseAww...that was such a sweet ending. It almost made me cry. This story was well-planned out that's for sure. I can't wait for updates on The Untold Story.
grdiang3l
2006-04-01
ch 14, anon.
abuseHOLY! ITS AN UPDATE!and the ENDING TOO?? i've been pinning away for this story and i almost check everyday for it. (i have no idea why i'm obsessed) i just enjoy the story line and the way u write i guess. im looking forward to ur other stories! keep it up!
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