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Setsuna Bu
2005-12-17 . chapter 5
Love M/W fics. I hope you update soon!
aurora
2005-12-15 . chapter 5
I've been a bit delayed in finding this story, but I'm glad I did -- it's pretty good! I'm glad that your chapters are lengthening -- it gives the story more depth. However I still encourage you to continue to draw out the chapters bu describing characters, locations, emotions etc. It'll make the stories even more appealing/enjoyable :D and you've definitely got the potential to do way better! so keep up the good work!
Kelzaa
2005-12-14 . chapter 5
Nice chapter, so I guess the next will be her meeting 'past' Ames
Kelzaa
2005-11-30 . chapter 3
Nice chapter, when Amery gonna meet Ames?
SitaTheLastVampire
2005-11-30 . chapter 3
You already said it : but damn that's short! update fast!
SitaTheLastVampire
2005-11-25 . chapter 2
It's a M/W fic is it? Is it? Please update soon!!
THEHUNTRESS06
2005-11-17 . chapter 1
Hey, i like this story so far, nice job. Also love the charmed reference with chris and paige's names. good job. keep it up.
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