Naked midnight brawling! That was a hoot--and a wild mental image.

So ends an original flavor I'll never forget! Charming, witty, spiced with some fine action, and just the right kind of crazy. I'll never forget sharing with my friends "that Peppy-dates-a-supermodel fic."

Once again, really original Star Fox fic, in the most interesting way. Glad to see it finished at last! Very fitting, too, that Peppy gets the piano back.

I hope we'll see more Star Fox from you in the future!

~Doggirl

And after all this time this story is finally done. And what a great read in the end (no matter how long it took to get there).

It's great to see a writer do something like this as far as the story goes (get everybody out of their 'usual' roles), and take it seriously as well. That's why I've been entertained by this story for so long, and why I'm glad to see it finished after all this time too.

An outstanding job as usual with this and all of your other stories. Keep on writing!

So concludes one of the few romances I've ever read without gagging as well. Good job!

It's almost finished? Cool.
I just started reading this a little while ago, but it's a very interesting Star Fox story. A little different, but very nicely thought out and written.

"(...) and I blame his father."
lmao, WHAT? I'm considering the implications, and each one is more hilarious than the last.

Anyway, Max was fantastic, and I love the way you write Slippy and Peppy in this fic. Can't wait to see how the day (night?) is saved again.

what a cliffahnger...please continue. wonder how the addition of the badger will throw a wrench into the works

Nice.

Ahaha, "Call me if Falco calls in dead or something." Strangely hilarious (and very characteristic of Falco.) Also holy crap, Fox is a freak. You've hinted at it a lot, but it's still not something I expect!

My favorite moment this chapter is the "confrontation" with Celeste. You made both seem very civil and very human (for anthros, I mean), rather than just writing a bitter stuck-up screeching at a defensive young model.

Looking forward to what happens with all the psi foreshadowing.

I laughed out loud twice, on parts I can't remember. lol.
I find most of the hilarity in that Peppy is getting action from a model.
Kind of an interesting set up, it's like Fast and the Furious StarFox style. Personally, it's not my type at all, but it's a good story nonetheless.

"Cat scratch fever." Bahaha.

Hey hey hey!


It's NFE7 calling to tell you, Ringshadow, that this is one of the best SF romances that I've read. It kept my freaking attention (And I have ADD, so that's a serious accomplishment)


Good jiv!

Very good don't change a thing!

I regret to say I'm not as big of a Star Fox fan as you probably are, cause then I just know I'd enjoy this a lot more. Not to say that I don't already, but I have an inkling that there's a few things in here that only a true fan could appreciate.

Well I told you you'd get your flare back, and you did. I never thought I'd see a 50 word chapter fly by so fast. It's the sort of thing you only expect from Dan Brown novels, but I daresay what you're doing here requires more skill than whatever he does.

Things between Erin and Peppy get tricky. Kind of. I'm sure I've said this before, but I love the fairytale/realistic quality to this piece. You do it wonderfully. Blurring the line between fact and fiction. I mean, they're anthros. That's difficult to work with, period.

And it might be simple immaturity, but I couldn't help but smile at the sexual innuendo.

Nice work with the whole persistence thing.

-Ochi

"Ah. Capital." I actually rather like Nate, haha.
Reading about the guys all goin' out and having fun is surprisingly fun for me, too, and the doctor's explanation was hilariously crass.
Still the most original Star Fox fic I've seen, and it keeps going! Good luck next chapter.

THAT WAS FUNNY! but some of those chapters were too long for me! :D

Purring bunny! Hehehe, I can't shake the image, either. Nor the one of Peppy dressed up. It *works* in a crazy way.
And the breakfast conversation was wacky--I loved how casually everyone discussed anatomy and such. I chuckled at lots of places, including "midpriced tail" and Slippy's laments over lack of girlfriend (poor dude needs a hook-up).
Another light, fun chapter!