I absolutely love this story! I see it's been a while since you last updated, but I am hoping the you update real soon! this story is perfectly plotted out and it has me on my toes to know what happens next. the dog idea was very unique, i liked it. Well, please update soon and I'll continue checking everyday to see when you do.

I love the way you're taking the story in a different direction. I'm very curious to see exactly what this Courtney is (given the reference to "humans", I gather she and her mom are not human), and what she has to do with Gaston. I'm very glad that you're updating!

OMG! I just love your retelling of B&B, one of my favorite movies! I also love The Wiz, and I notice you're a real Disney fan as well! You write like a real storyteller, and I love the additions of the dogs. (I am also trying to write a love story involving pound puppies) And by the way, I'd like a Lumiere plushie, as he is my favorite character.

I REALLY like the character of Cary! He has an amusing and likable personality, and I'm especially intrigued at the continuing idea that the spell caused people to forget the castle, and the effect that that has on the relatives of the people IN the castle. It's so "Twilight Zone" - no one believes Cary when he insists he DID have a sister and that she worked in the castle. I love that idea. And now he and Maurice will team up to escape the insane asylum and rescue Belle and Cary's sister - I'm eager to see how that plays out. You really have a lot of original and interesting ideas in this story. (P.S. I sent you an email about fixing the spacing in this chapter, and a couple of spelling corrections, so do an Export and fix those when you can.)

Ah, so they meet! I wonder how Cozette will try to get Belle and Beast together? And how she'll react when she realizes Sultan's a dog. :)

I really like this chapter - especially the way you put such a different spin on the mob situation. I like that the story is now going in a different situation from the movie; you're making it original and unpredictable, and that's fun. I'm very curious to see what happens to Gaston in the woods!

Kind reviews deserve to be returned. =) Finally had a chance to sit down and thoroughly read your story, m'dear, and I am amazed at the creativity. Definitely could have never imagined B&B from THIS POV, as my own dogs and cat never respond to the film so well...although my one dog DOES voice her opinion by howling during the Enchanted Christmas, but I digress, LOL. Definitely want to see more, so bring it soon!

That was a really great rescue scene! I had always wondered how she managed to get him on the horse! I also never heard anyone describe his paw as "soft". Before the nails were always sharp and the fur, rough. I like it this way. It gives Cardell some tenderness. Great job! Keep it up and write the next chapter! Lots a luv!

Ooh! I want a Gaston plushie, if you're handing 'em out! Anyway, this was a great chapter. I really loved the way you described the wolf fight - very dramatic! And Cardell's dream was VERY intriguing. You're really starting to bring your own original twists and turns into this, and I like it a lot!

Um, wow you stayed pretty true to the original Disney plot there. Not a bad thing, but try to mix things up...write the sceen hoe you think it should have been or something. Otherwise...Yeah, I knew that the dog thing was originally a joke, but once i started reading it sounded serious. So...did Beast disappear or something. He wasn't in this chapter. I know its hard when your trying ot focus on one event, but just so we know he's alive, try to throw in a little of his "Meanwhile-ness". I know, I know, i must sound very cranky today, I'm very sorry. Just know that I'm getting a kick out of this story and you should keep up the good work! Lots a luv!

Um...good so far, a little confusing about the dogs, but hey, its your fic. Keep up the great work! Lots a luv!

I like this so far, it's interesting. I'll read the rest when I have a chance but I need to sleep now. I started this earlier but had too many distractions, like wrapping presents lol. Anyway I like it and I'll keep reading when I can.

I really liked the use of Sultan in chapter 9 - I'm very curious to see what happens when he meets Cozette! And I like you putting your own original spin on the proposal scene here. It's definitely better when you do it your own way instead of just copying the movie. Keep writing!

Again, good retelling, and I like the role you gave Sultan here.

This is funny, but doesn't really fit in with the rest of the story. This chapter would be better as part of a different kind of retelling, a parody version, IMO.