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| cc1162 2008-04-25 ch 19, anon. | abuseGreat story right up untill the end. It seemed really rushed like you just wanted it to be finished and didnt really care how the final battle went. i mean you had Harry learn all the old spells and things that had been lost over the years only to use a simple summing charm to win the duel. seems kinda unlikely. The story was very well writen excpt the last chapter. |
| Flavius Marcus Septimus Agu... 2008-03-11 ch 19, anon. | abuseIt's been a great story. I so glad you finally finished it, but the end was kinda abrupt (was that 'just to get it done' or did you end it like you always intended? I've kept waiting, and waiting, and waiting for the end of the story. I'm very pleased that you you did finish it - lots of fan fiction never has an end at all. Anyway, thanks again for a good story. |
| ArchMage988gamma 2008-02-28 ch 19,  | abuseThe fic was great. I hope to see a seequel. |
| Jimm 2008-02-28 ch 19, | abuseThis was a good story, thanks for sharing it with us. |
| Nights Silhouette 2007-04-05 ch 18, | abuseAn ok story to date, keep it up. |
| msand 2006-12-11 ch 18, anon. | abuseWhen I finished this chaper I only just noticed the number of reviews. This is a very good story. I hope that you plan on finishing it. It is so hard to find good fics at this time. ms |
| Corran1327 2006-12-10 ch 18, | abusevery good do you intend on updateding this |
| Rosie5 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story and it's going well. Positive things; you've nailed Ron's character very well and Kreacher is amusing to the point of believability! I have one minor (and it's me being picky) problem. Please do correct me if I'm wrong, but I get the impression that you're American? (I'm not US bashing, I adore the country) but the fic comes across a little ... un-British if you know what I mean, Harry in particular. I don't really know how you fix that ... re-read the books until you can read them no more I guess, but it's just I'd hate to see it detract from what seems to be well thought out plot line. |
| slate-one 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseDear Mic: Do you know that there is another HP story called "he Crux of the Matter" on The Sugar Quill fan fiction website? Just thought you ought to know. |
| DaBear 2006-04-27 ch 18, | abuseSo Trauma Plates in the vests stopped the AK? Kewl! Then again they need to do something about the backlash but its a step forward :) Great Chapter. |
| 23reasons 2006-04-25 ch 17, anon. | abuseYeah, so, its been well over a month now since the last update. If this story is abandoned, please say so in your profile, because I really enjoyed it, and would like to see more soon. |
| tywalshe1414 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseLove the story, update soon please :) |
| snow fox2000 2006-03-21 ch 17, | abusegood story update soon |
| Skippy Agogo 2006-03-14 ch 17, | abuseI have liked your story thus far. The only major criticism I have with it is that bit way earlier that Ron would find US Football interesting; not a chance. If canon ron found soccer dull... US type football makes golf look exciting. Like the ref's to other books of fantasy. Really liked the idea of tossing the snake into Etna (just had to steal from Tolkin eh? :)) |
| Matt101 2006-01-14 ch 13, | abuseGreat story... keep it up :) |